10-15 lines i spit first no d/r

Rap:

Look every one we got a hustla in here/hes chokin on his mic now and shittin in fear

You think you gonna be in this rap game/your mum herd your mix tape and is cryin in shame

have you noticed when i spit the crowd get hyped/when you spit all they think is spiked

you so used to chokin now you jus take the mic and shove it down your throat/you even makin a livin out of chokin £20 per choke

thats why you always have 80 spare in your coat/you probably choked enough now to conduct a bolt

you say you a yung hustla but you nothin but a yung wankster/a ever anoying president bush private dancer

you think your a vet but your just bushs pet/his own personal assistant in bed

when i be spitten to a crowd it seem like cancer to you/although it cant take effect on you since you got fryed by a bolt didin you?(look at line 5)

nigga i got pumps that blow bolts/
18 shots to ya dome qb like the colts/
my nigga things bigger i stay on da block/
i carry nines and dem glocks that will fuck up ya block
and if i let the clipz go its multiple shoti never herd shit like that/
yo wack ass bitch gun shots to da back/
ya moms got cancer, shes and bitch/
she still and exotic dancer and yous and snitch/
gangsta here i have no fear nigga/
my game is fucking bitches and pulling triggaz/

I think it was a tie.....You both need to step it up......come see me and I will teach you............................................... .................................................. ..............................................

ya both ya'll did aight not a bad battle but i think young got this shit.............

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68482 young poll at vote there, ppl sleepin

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yeah this battle was too basic...you both need to improve some....but none the less i think young took it.........

hey can ya check out this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=66760

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both need to elevate....BS showed more effort and had betta disses........punches were so so..

young needs more help.....be more creative...have betta punches and learn to battle rap

voteBlacksash

that shit was too basic from the pair of you!!!!!!!!!!
too much gun shit???????????
BLACKSASH i still wanna battle you stop runnin away
did you write that before yor PAPERROUND????? (or before your mum brought you milk and cookies????????
I WOULD GIVE THIS SHIT YOUNG but i cant vote

Blacksash got this in a close one, not a bad battle by both, sash just had slightly better punches.
vote - backsash
return the favour, drop an honest vote on my battle
find it here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68742

Was this a wack battle?

..yep..

Do they both need to elevate?

..much so..

Was it close?

..in wackness, yes..

Who edged it out?

..Yung..

Any other comments?

HIT THIS SHIT UP!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=68317

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