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Old 04-19-03, 11:00 PM   #1
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Concise - Ya feelin' me? (Free verse, takes shots at Crook-Ed and Statik)

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Its the only track there..

Ummm.. I dont know why I did this, I was bored and very
high and started writing. Why take shots at these emcees?
I really dunno, just what I was thinkin I guess.....

Cise

Only reason I did this is cuz I realized I hadnt spit in like
2 months, and wanted to prepair for the rnr tourney.
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Old 04-19-03, 11:06 PM   #2
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yo..

beat is tight, its got a dope underground vibe. this is nice, its got a madd underground vibe to it...lyrics are pretty tigt...flow and delievery was good..nice track
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Old 04-19-03, 11:06 PM   #3
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This was pretty good... i liked the beat... i guess u dissed them but not really sorry..... too short...shoulda spit longer and shit but overall it was a 6.9/10 keep elevatin'..........

return tha favor and peep my shit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=40279

thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 04-19-03, 11:07 PM   #4
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Lol, it wasnt supposed to be a diss track...
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Old 04-19-03, 11:14 PM   #5
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I guess if u try to diss someone and you don't then you say its not a diss track and all that, but 5 posts above you say u takin' shots at people so which is it....you gotta decide eventually.....man.....truth
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Old 04-19-03, 11:19 PM   #6
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Lmao! What are you talking about? You never heard of
a free verse? Dawg its just a verse I sat down and started
writing, and in that verse, i took mediocre shots at some
heads. That is not a diss track... You are a moron.. End
of story...

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Old 04-19-03, 11:22 PM   #7
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I guess if u try to diss someone and you don't then you say its not a diss track and all that, but 5 posts above you say u takin' shots at people so which is it....you gotta decide eventually.....man.....truth
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Dawg, you talk like I made a serious lyrical attempt to go
at these cats. I guess you have never heard me before
because if I wanted to come at someone, I would do it.
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Old 04-19-03, 11:31 PM   #8
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okay.. calm, calm down no need to flip out but one word of advice next time don't ever not spit your hardest....always come correct and do tha bewst u can no matter what man...just remember that u never wanna look bad or lose cuase u were'nt serious.....
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Old 04-19-03, 11:35 PM   #9
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Ok I respect that advice, but you really dont understand..
Im not gonna come my hardest and diss kids when I dont
want it to be a diss track. Do you listen to Hiphop man?
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Old 04-20-03, 01:18 AM   #10
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whoa
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Old 04-20-03, 01:49 AM   #11
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i think whut hes tryna say is how do we crritique it: "takin shots" or see it as purely a freeverse "takin shots"?...lol, see how confusing u made things !!!!!!!!

and since u admitted it was a weak verse, i concluded that u didnt come your strongest...
oNE...

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Old 04-20-03, 12:41 PM   #12
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It was aight, wasn't that great. The flow was real old school tho. Do u man, keep that.
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Old 04-20-03, 02:23 PM   #13
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whoa, fuck you man, do i listen to hiphop? what kind of fuckin' question is that you must be a little bitch to ask a question like that fuck you man...........it's on........
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Old 04-20-03, 02:50 PM   #14
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lol "its on"... gangsta...

Just shut the fuck up and get out of my thread.. Fact is
i would murder you in anything lyrical.. So you can diss
me or something or do whatever you want.. just dont
hold it against me when you get worked...

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Old 04-20-03, 03:05 PM   #15
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How do you people not understand this? This is just a freeverse..
If eminem came on here and posted "Square Dance (Takes shots
at Canibus)" You guys wouldnt come in here saying "Well I guess
you dissed him, but not really" You are stupid, it wasnt a diss
track to canibus, he just randomly threw a shot at him "Canibitch
dont wanna dance with me"

Its the same situation.. faggots

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