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Old 05-06-07, 03:41 PM   #1
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Old 05-06-07, 03:44 PM   #2
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again...heard this on AIM


beat is mixed loud

but the flow is slammin

plus, I like ur presence on track


Jay 3rd...soundin nice on here as well...u all complement each other well...good flow...less complex than 3rd eye's tho...but the delivery was good


it was a nice lil banger




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Old 05-06-07, 03:48 PM   #3
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good looks on the collab man... not bad for an hour write n record for me lol.. nice lil old school feel to it.. i think it was the beat that made my quality a lil off.. like i said i usually record on 28-32 DB but i had to use 36 Db on this otherwise u couldnt hear me at all lol.. i think the beat was mixed too loud..but good shit man, work on the punch in like i said and ya verses gone be nice

flow was pretty good lyrics was decent nice lil sample hook..

mine.. well needs a lil work but yall decide..
rate this a 7/10 tight work man, always like then old school feel
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Old 05-06-07, 09:46 PM   #4
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Feeling this track alot, the vibe ya give off is great. Hook is fire, Verses are on point, gotta listen to it again cus i really didnt pay attention to lyrics the flows were on point though. Defintely good track man. 9 outta 10, just the mix was keepin it from a 10. Good track. props!!
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Old 05-08-07, 06:41 PM   #5
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Old 05-09-07, 02:29 PM   #6
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dig the beat and sample like whoa. comin a lil too soft i think, ya verse aint really on topic to the chorus i dont think at all. second got some quality problems. came into the chorus good, but still the verses here should be on some fuck the world type shit, not the, im a nice guy and i dont even have a tool type shit.
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Old 05-09-07, 04:30 PM   #7
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Old 05-11-07, 10:54 AM   #8
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The beat is tight....I'm feelin this hook.....yall is straight on the lyrics.....both flowz are iite but need some work.....the deliveries are ok, nothin special.....
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