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05-20-05, 05:51 PM
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Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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::...Talk About Talent...::
IP: 7CEA E0BB
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191207
Woooooooooooooooo Serious...Quick 16 Keys Touched........Hands Caress Em......Fingers Give Birth 2 Words Flirt Wit Different 'LIMBS OF EXPLANATION'.........U Dictionary Herbs! Have No Lives Beyond This..............Half Look Weak I'm Astonished Nigga Got Da 'Possesiveness'.......To Make Da Devil Look Harmless! Throw Tarnage, At Me? I'm Tossin Back Gay Assassins So Get Happi Faggets Diss Me, I'll Send Em 'PICK-UP-LINES' For Tryna Get At Me! Wordplay Ya Shine...I Smother Cocks Wit Ex-Lax & Make Dicks Run! Go Get Guns..Blast At Brains Til Ya 'SENSE-HALF' Like 50 Cents Son! If I Gotta Grip Heads.......My Hands Reflection.......Will Mirror Ya Hair I Admit I Ain Fair, Cuz I'm 'POPPIN-HIGH'.......Like Pussies In Da Air! Tell Me About Myself, YES I Enjoy It.....................Ack's Kinda Cocky Pay 4 Falls Or U'll Drop Free, Then 'K-K-K' Any Nigga Ina WHITE-TEE Aeyo Thats My Bitch!, Yep...........Da One U Call Wifey, She Pipes Me I Get More Fun Outta 'STRAPIN-SPINES'.......Like A Belts-Behind Me! Since U Gotta Cum-Hard.....Ya Erections In Job Lines......Just Waitin Nut....Watch Ya Eyes 'BUST-SHORTER' Than Pre-Mature Ejaculation! Jeah...Talk About Talent! (1) 50 Cent's Son.....LIL'50.....He's HALF His Sense.....Connect Da Dots
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05-20-05, 06:47 PM
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IP: 7CEA E0BB
Da Fuck....Say Somethin You Lettin It Go Down 2 Da Boondocks Already.....SMH
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C.S!....Crhyme Sindicate Quote:
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05-20-05, 06:49 PM
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NO SURRENDER
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IP: 828D 0B7A
ite here we go,
not bad but some of the ppunches were a bit meh, flowed well for the most part, few played concepts, but for a quick drop i was feelin it a lot mayne, nice shit.. now go drop in our battle, i already did!
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05-20-05, 07:04 PM
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The story goes. Bill, B.
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IP: 606D F99A
damn you Ack...why r u so damn good...some punches were meh but overall the verse was sick...like TB lol....or maybe chicken pox...that's always bad...where was I? oh yeah nice shit man...8.5/10...rtf on anything i got lol
p.s. sry bout our collab...personal probs..damn females stressin me lol....
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05-20-05, 07:16 PM
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IP: 7CEA E0BB
Jeah @ Daubs I Got You Son.................................Aha @ L.F.S. No Problem Nigga I Aint Write Mines Either Lol
....UPPIN'
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C.S!....Crhyme Sindicate Quote:
"Y's My Record 9-6?...Cuz I Battle Competition!" |
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05-20-05, 07:36 PM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: D5AB 74BE
this was aight, some decent concepts..
bit stretched which takes away from the effectivness of your punches, add multi's for flow or shorten ya lines... but dont get me wrong it was aight........
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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05-20-05, 10:19 PM
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IP: 6175 E350
Jeah Dis Shit Was Real Quick........I Only Spent Like 10 Mins On It No Lie
UPPIN'
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C.S!....Crhyme Sindicate Quote:
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05-20-05, 11:13 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 28AD 5545
Ack Nice Flow!Some Punches Were Nice N Some Were Basic!Liked Da 50 Cent line Man!LoL!Flow Was nice!Structure Was Kind of OFF!but Nice Shyt Man!Honest!8/10 Holla Atcha boy!
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05-21-05, 03:56 PM
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Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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IP: 526F 8E19
Jeah Da Structure Was Off.........It Was Quick As Fuck But I'm Glad You Feelin It
UPPIN'
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C.S!....Crhyme Sindicate Quote:
"Y's My Record 9-6?...Cuz I Battle Competition!" |
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05-21-05, 04:09 PM
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**the council**
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IP: AAD5 DCA7
no doubt your talented.........nice lil piece, some punches were good, some were not so good but a nice drop anyway....keep doing it fam
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05-21-05, 05:30 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
I was feelin tha multies. Nice verse. This was a nice drop. I think there couldve been more, but w/e, Nice quick dope shit. 7/10 for me..
Check out my OM....Livin' Large... ~1~ |
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05-21-05, 10:09 PM
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Eh...this was decent could have been alot better...
Multies were on point i was really feelin it.. Structyre was onpoint.. pretty decent flow... Punches were blah... they could have been alot better.. some were good , but some were just played or vert weak... Overall decent peice... could have been better.. Keep it up
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05-22-05, 09:37 PM
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Lyrics Put MCs On Atkin's Diet!
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IP: 07FC 67D9
Good Looks M-Eazy, Mizz & Bone.............Feelin Ya Feedback About Da Punches Lol Now Dat I Read Em They Coulda Been Betta
UPPIN'
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C.S!....Crhyme Sindicate Quote:
"Y's My Record 9-6?...Cuz I Battle Competition!" |
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