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Old 01-13-05, 11:01 AM   #1
Cri$$tyle
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lil freestyle

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MuThErFuKaz! im back....thugged out with ah mutherfucking gat,
game doesn't want it- i run it-like a lady with straps,
bombs drop while i'm on top dropping your caskets,
yall hataz is waiting to be eaten like apples in baskets,
my punchlines be tha hardest str8 mopping you bastards,
and i ryde tracks like ah race car my elevation is fastest,
i aint tha type you should fuck with- loaded up wit that glock shit,
stop this this? no mercy like my niggaz in jersey,
think your rhyming? but you aint climbing like them children in nurserys,
ryding ah chrome click BOOM!- smoked out your room.

you hear your BLOOD running well i'm coming soon....

to be continued...
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Old 01-13-05, 11:05 AM   #2
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WTF?...what tha hell is this...do you think yo rappin to 10 year olds or sumthin...give it up homie, its not workin for you...fall back and come at a different angle...if not, retire
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Old 01-13-05, 11:15 AM   #3
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You must drop a link to an Open Mic you posted Decent feed on or this will be closed.
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Old 01-13-05, 12:19 PM   #4
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You must drop a link to an Open Mic you posted Decent feed on or this will be closed.


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WTF?...what tha hell is this...do you think yo rappin to 10 year olds or sumthin...give it up homie, its not workin for you...fall back and come at a different angle...if not, retire


^^^^^^^^

If you want to battle set up the thread. I know 10 year olds that don't freepost
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Old 01-13-05, 12:22 PM   #5
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Old 01-13-05, 12:30 PM   #6
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you back?...from where i wonder...anyways this was okay...nothin special....4/10...elevate
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Old 01-13-05, 12:31 PM   #7
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i changed my name so...

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all that battle shit wont happen...i was hatin for no reason...we might battle...just not now...
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Old 01-13-05, 12:38 PM   #8
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^ so your logged in with two names?

you know there's no point of hating...i wanna make friends not enemies

holla at me
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Old 01-13-05, 12:43 PM   #9
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^^LOL naw, see i hated so many times cuz i thought i would get banned...when i found out that wouldnt happen...i typed up "announcement to everybody" announcing my SR$ retirement...now im back as a new nigga witta new name...its just...how i was feelin...but no hate...*i got a feelin im gone have to make this a thread so i wont have to explain to everybody else*...~1~
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Old 01-13-05, 12:47 PM   #10
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Aight dawg do your thang

i'm used of being hated, maybe wecan do a collabo about hataz. so send me your verse nigga

Peace
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Old 01-13-05, 12:58 PM   #11
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i got you...look 4 it soon...~1~
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Old 01-13-05, 04:53 PM   #12
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ok this wasnt good at all it was a sorry verse you can elevate. improve your vocab it would help it always help. your structure was decent. your flow was off at time not a good verse ill give it a 3.2/10
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Old 01-13-05, 06:18 PM   #13
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pretty whack......
too much gangsta shit, but keep elevatin like your song says, return the fave, peace
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Old 01-14-05, 06:20 AM   #14
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Everyone drops "gangster shit" that isn't new.
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