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01-15-06, 05:20 PM | #1 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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Socrates - The Return
IP: 2BF7 6B2E
I finally got a mic but i'm rusty in all aspects IMO. Let's see what y'all think.
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=301790 And the old as hell, but still legal links... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205333 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217250 pz
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01-15-06, 05:25 PM | #2 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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IP: EF80 099D
Word.....welcome back.
Suprisingly your flow was pretty nice on this one. I liked the Number One Track without droppin 20 names line.....You quality was actually pretty nice as well.....this wasn't that bad of a track overall.....honestly. Good job man ™
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01-15-06, 06:07 PM | #3 | |||||||
I see dumb people
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IP: AF88 6884
peeping beat coo..... quality aiight. pretty nice.
damn your flow pretty tight dude. good lyrics. lmao @ 20 names line. dope multi's here and there. I ain't really like beat, ehh getting annoying. lol But your flow and shit good. nice delivery. OVerall, pretty tight man. 8.7/10 really liked it. emotion maybe up a tiny bit. overall dope. RTF if you can: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=219680
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01-15-06, 06:44 PM | #4 | ||||||
Power Hungry
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IP: 99DA B879
this shit was aiigh'
got kinda dull after awhile due to lack of delivery and emotion
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01-15-06, 06:49 PM | #5 | ||||||
...Jea...
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IP: 3240 794D
this was hott especialy for a coemback/dust the dust off the mic song...i was definitly feelin this song...lyrics and flow were real hott...nice job mayne, rtf...
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01-16-06, 02:40 AM | #6 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: 2BF7 6B2E
Thanks everyone, bump.
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01-16-06, 12:49 PM | #7 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: 2BF7 6B2E
You guys.......c'monnnnnn.
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01-16-06, 03:19 PM | #8 | |||
OYD
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IP: 1ADC A69C
Beat is good
I see you like pop music I like ur flow/deliv. combination lacks energy tho, especially since ur really coming lyrical...expression man! I wouldn't mind collabin with you on some real tip Good track 1 |
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01-16-06, 07:59 PM | #9 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: 2BF7 6B2E
Word, maybe soon. Bump.
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01-16-06, 08:00 PM | #10 | |||
Addicted
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IP: A848 829B
yea thats the first that came to mind it was lackin emotion wit those lyrics..nice drop fo real
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01-16-06, 10:09 PM | #11 | |||||
Blow Me
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IP: 28A8 B6DC
your flow is cool as shit.. i really like it.. but i agree with everyone.. ur emotion could be upped
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01-17-06, 12:25 AM | #12 | |||||||
Artist, that simple
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IP: 317F 66B6
Yo, pretty decent track. Quality was really good. Your flow was simple, and didnt have a lot of variety throughout the track. Just work on changing your ability to deliver your words with a larger variety of difference, except for the same sentence structure that you have now. Your emotion feel off half way through, which made me lose interest. But pretty good track. Uppin for my boi S to the O... C.
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01-17-06, 01:19 AM | #13 | ||||
To The Ground...
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IP: B883 0CC4
You sounded like a penis in autumn. or something.
But cool. Welcome back. Your old quality sucked ass, glad to see its better now.
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01-17-06, 10:10 PM | #14 | |||||||
I can rap and stuff.
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IP: 2BF7 6B2E
Thanks guys.
Bump.
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01-23-06, 01:44 AM | #15 | |||||
in your system
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IP: 9E2F CDE8
yeah, it was fresh, pretty sweet for being rusty....did start to get a little dull though, liked the "called the best" line, lol, good stuff man, keep up
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