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Old 04-23-06, 08:54 AM   #1
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18. ~Test~ (0-0) vs 19. SlicKnife (0-0)

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Old 04-23-06, 10:19 AM   #2
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Old 04-23-06, 02:26 PM   #3
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dudes stuck ur to high now thiers nothing to be done
but ill help you get down... Right str8 to 0-1
Knife shit you cutting me up is well fucking hopless
cuz this knife only comes packed..cuz the fucking kid is homless
im drunk as fuck ima kill this herb while drinking booze
so watch me take advantage of this pussy
............................................cuz he's going two loose (lose)
Fag hasent even checked yet fuckin bitch is scared
watch me match my shit with him..And thier a fucking pair
This homo is a fruad this Fags future is looking really Dem
and i gotta admit
this dude is sharp and slick with his rymes only cuz he rubs butter on then
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Old 04-23-06, 04:53 PM   #4
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You posted already....well 10 lines it is

Get ready to be taught a lesson in text
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Old 04-24-06, 04:39 PM   #5
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Just stay posting at RE and leave this site

What do you know about me...

Impressive still, let me clear something up and the rest is ill
You suck, just call yourself wackness…’cause your def not a Test of skill!
Your one of B.S, trying to beat me when I own rap sites…
Where theres a Will theres a way…just explains how you get him home at night!
Thats right & what have you accomplished, let me read it order
Because life is short…still yours wishes it could be even shorter!
Many ways to prepare for this test…better be precise
‘But you fucking suck period’<<< is something that will never be revised!
Ever seen this might, well poor bitch I just won this spar
But you would be rich…if you were half as well-off as your punches are!

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Old 04-24-06, 04:56 PM   #6
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dudes stuck ur to high now thiers nothing to be done
but ill help you get down... Right str8 to 0-1

vs

Your one of B.S, trying to beat me when I own rap sites…
Where theres a Will theres a way…just explains how you get him home at night!

Ever seen this might, well poor bitch I just won this spar
But you would be rich…if you were half as well-off as your punches are!

vote:slick...more consistent, more quotebles all that good stuff..
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Old 04-24-06, 05:13 PM   #7
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^ that vote dont count explain better

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Old 04-24-06, 05:32 PM   #8
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None

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Many ways to prepare for this test…better be precise
‘But you fucking suck period’<<< is something that will never be revised!
Ever seen this might, well poor bitch I just won this spar
But you would be rich…if you were half as well-off as your punches are!

Onesided Test came out the weakest I have evr seen in this league. Slick didn't come to great but I liked his closer pretty dope. Basically Slick was just in the right direction while T est I just don't know. Anyway...

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Old 04-24-06, 05:34 PM   #9
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Knife shit you cutting me up is well fucking hopless
cuz this knife only comes packed..cuz the fucking kid is homless

Concept was decent, ehh wording.

VS

Ever seen this might, well poor bitch I just won this spar
But you would be rich…if you were half as well-off as your punches are!

Moce play, liked this

Slick took it with a more consistant verse. Weak but better.

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Old 04-25-06, 06:26 PM   #10
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So its 3-0 to me...
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Old 04-25-06, 07:06 PM   #11
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Knife shit you cutting me up is well fucking hopless
cuz this knife only comes packed..cuz the fucking kid is homless

Vs.

Your one of B.S, trying to beat me when I own rap sites…
Where theres a Will theres a way…just explains how you get him home at night!
^lmfao

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Old 04-27-06, 04:28 PM   #12
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Knife shit you cutting me up is well fucking hopless
cuz this knife only comes packed..cuz the fucking kid is homless

vs.

Your one of B.S, trying to beat me when I own rap sites…
Where theres a Will theres a way…just explains how you get him home at night!
Ever seen this might, well poor bitch I just won this spar
But you would be rich…if you were half as well-off as your punches are!

test, you weren't that bad, but not great either. i liked that packin knife line. real witty. try and do more shit like that, mixed with personals, then your sure to win. slick, nice verse. some meh lines in there and some dope lines. the will/way line was dope. keep that shit up man.

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Old 04-28-06, 09:03 AM   #13
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NOTHING.

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Impressive still, let me clear something up and the rest is ill
You suck, just call yourself wackness…’cause your def not a Test of skill!
Ever seen this might, well poor bitch I just won this spar
But you would be rich…if you were half as well-off as your punches are!


Honestly, this battle was not too interesting. Test dropped a weak verse and not a single bar was worth quoting, that knife/homeless line was ok I guess if this was like 2 years ago but now it needs to harder. The wording was off, the concept was nice but with weak wording it just makes the punch lose its appeal. Slick came pretty average although the nameplay at the start was ok. It could've been worded better but it still came off as a decent punch. That gay line about the Will shit was weak, I mean everyone complains now about homo lines and yet people are still quoting them as good. They are too played, I mean every concept now is pretty much played and its just a means of flipping it good.... the gay concept was flipped nicely but the concept itself is one of those that REALLY has been used to the maximum. The best bar was the closer, the rich line was flipped nicely at the end for an affective diss and it made me laugh. It was quite fresh, I've seen the concept of punches not hitting used a few times before, but that bar was one of the more creative ways of using it. Overall, Slick by far had the better verse and deserves the win.

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Old 04-28-06, 11:08 AM   #14
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Old 04-29-06, 12:10 PM   #15
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Knife shit you cutting me up is well fucking hopless
cuz this knife only comes packed..cuz the fucking kid is homless

vs.

Impressive still, let me clear something up and the rest is ill
You suck, just call yourself wackness…’cause your def not a Test of skill!
Your one of B.S, trying to beat me when I own rap sites…
Where theres a Will theres a way…just explains how you get him home at night!

SlicKnife took this. .
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