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07-22-05, 03:51 PM
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out in the open
IP: D40E 67D5
ayo i just put thoughts together that cause lyrical damage
ghetto spoken some call the young sir and some call the savage problems bum rush ya ass i feel sorry for you. came up in this new game came out pink and blue. nigga im like cass ima hustla ima ima hustla homie i got illmatic flows for real customerz homie red and white bandana leanine sideways i be like paul wall peoples champ sittin sideways haterz keep talkin pretty soon they gon be barfin cuz ya'll punks get laid down and nailed to ur coffin not often do ego's ever win the situation. it'll be like a punk ass cop askin for licensce and registration i say what the problem is mr.officer man shouldnt you be lookin for the missin doughtnut,jelly man then he tips his clipboard and say's u got a problem i say yes i do break his nose and said but i solve em jumped his ass and threw him into the back of my trunk im cussin in the front sayin bitch i aint no punk... then i do 90 in the freeway and let it go off the side. then in my head im sayin haha....you punk bitch die!!!!!! ahaha...................just bored so im freestylin homie what ya'll think and bonecollector hold up ima post the link just chill
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07-22-05, 03:52 PM
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IP: D40E 67D5
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=201236
there ya go homie?!
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07-22-05, 04:52 PM
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hahaha................yea spread the word homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!thanks
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07-22-05, 05:11 PM
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Was feelin this man, you elevated...
Pretty consistant, decent flow and nice imagery...Vocab was also decent. Good shits man.
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07-22-05, 05:14 PM
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ayo man thanks homie you str8 homie keep ur flows comein homie cuz i be postin my comments and you now me so yea peace check out my battles to peace........
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07-24-05, 02:51 PM
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this was good, pretty funny stuff, lol, was feelin the flow, vocab was decent, keep it up man
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07-26-05, 11:11 AM
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ayo thanks for the feedback homies!!!!!!!!!uppin this ayo check my song out ima drop it later in OM homies feed on that too ill drop a link later peace
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07-26-05, 11:16 AM
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yeah i thought it was funny lol, good to read as it had good flow, lyric wasnt too deep, a lil angry lol which is good now and again
i say what the problem is mr.officer man shouldnt you be lookin for the missin doughtnut,jelly man ^^lol good stuff! peace  ooh and RTF plz, link in my sig! 
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This is my sig. what? I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =) I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks! |
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07-26-05, 12:08 PM
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ayo man thanks for the feed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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