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delicious_muffin 0 0%
Lyric_RevelatioN 3 100.00%
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Old 11-06-04, 01:39 AM   #1
Lyric_RevelatioN
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delicious_muffin vs Lyric_RevelatioN

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Old 11-06-04, 01:39 AM   #2
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Old 11-06-04, 01:41 AM   #3
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Old 11-06-04, 01:41 AM   #4
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I accept, althought im new ill try to spit some..i aint greatest but i aint worse.
Thanks.
Muff
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Old 11-06-04, 02:04 AM   #5
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You say your gonna win and blah blah blah but all i know is i will throw u into a wall
Youll fly into next week ill spit in your face and fuck your mom hahaha whose got it goin on?

Ejaculate all over the fucking place in your mouth and in you face
Your ryhmes are ridclious and so are you, go back to school and see what you can do

So you dont have to work at mickey ds everyday come on learn your ABCs and learn to count to three
I dont care if i win or loose this shit all i know is your moms riding my dick

Shes all over it all night and it just keeps gettin better and better hey hey, tell her your mom i forget my sweater
I have no punchlines i have no game, just tell your mom ill send her letter when my cracks aint lame

My shit is horrible and it just gets worse and worse
I know your dreading to read the next verse

You wanna talk shit? I coming after you, but hold up and let me tie my shoe.
I come running and I turn the corner and you start running you slip and fall and now your throwbacks all muddy

Im sick of ryhming and my head really hurts but let me quickly finish this last verse

Pop some tyneol and i hope you die because i dont really care
if your RIDE OR DIE
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Old 11-06-04, 02:09 AM   #6
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I tried my best all that matters..
I SHOULD OF QUOTED RIDE OR DIE THO..
mY BAD..gl LYRICS
Muff
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Old 11-06-04, 02:10 AM   #7
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Vote HONESTLY
No b/s or favoring..
str8 shit is good or not
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Old 11-06-04, 02:12 AM   #8
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this fuckin kid is wack so ill spit a half ass verse
hes a premature ejaculator nuthen but a "early burst"

ur rhymes are like playin a bad hand in poker your bluffin man
poison the shit you cook wit and kill the muffin man

delicious must be runnin in your family
cuz your mom sister and your aunt be on my dick daily

i dont even know why im here fuckin up this kid i ain fakin this
when i get done youll be askin 'why' more times than jadakiss

you could be a jedi but the force aint bein wit you this time
ill treat you like a baby and forcefeed you wit lines

how are you so bad, to me its a mystery
im the present and the future like jin's shit 'the rest is history'

you may get girls but by luck so just remember
you have no 'game' like the new GUINT member

this kids an annoying wife to me he keeps on naggin
i spit fire witout puffin the magic 'dragon'
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Old 11-06-04, 02:16 AM   #9
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Good shit good shit, aint gonna lie..
I think possibly i may have been out beaten..my shits old ya ya.
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Old 11-06-04, 02:20 AM   #10
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Voted For: Lyric_RevelatioN

v/ lyric revelation
was this a joke or something?
muffin i dont know what you are doing on here cause your rhymes were awful, you had no punches and your flow was way off
you should really learn some basics before you battle
good try i guess?
as for lyric you had some good punches and your flow was pretty much on for the most part, although you didnt have much competition...
lyric takes this one easy...
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Old 11-06-04, 02:26 AM   #11
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wow wasnt expectin competition to so fuckin weak oh well still uppin for votes
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Old 11-06-04, 02:26 AM   #12
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ItS MY FIRST TIME and little boy is gonna say shit? I dont think so..i loose one wow..shame he was sittin next to me spittin
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Old 11-06-04, 03:18 AM   #13
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This was feedback posted for Delicious_Muffin

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jus checkin the polls...............................
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Old 11-06-04, 05:30 AM   #14
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youd lose every fuckin battle u keep spittin that garbage
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Old 11-06-04, 10:41 AM   #15
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muffin u just got burnt in the oven man but if u keep working at it u mite be ok sone day .....lol .......
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