I dont give a fuck what you think....im too gutted for that. RIP lauren.

I never thought it would happen to me, but unluckily it did..
How must her mum and dad feel if even i was devestated.

I could talk to you about anything and know you wouldnt tell..
Thought earth was like heaven, but all of a sudden it seems like hell.

Why couldnt you be late by a few minutes, let thge lights change to red..
I can never tell you my secrets again, not now your dead.

Used to think little things were important, now its just an empty world..
How can there be a god, when he claimed the life of an innocent girl..

Couldnt help but feel emotional when i walked past the crime scene..
Had so much to look forward to, but instead you got death at only 14.

Im not embarassed to say, even though its the first time in years..
Walkded past the scene with the flowers, and couldnt help but shed tears.

I dont give a fuck if it was shit, i did it off the dome and dont care what you think, im just devestated, post feed if you want, i dont care.
Its all true.
RIP lauren, friend for ever girl.

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yo there aint nuthin to be ashamed of

its fucked up if anyone gets killed at such an early age

R.I.P. didn't know her but still that's fucked

but it dont matter if this was the wackest piece ever cuz its just you showing respect and expressin yaself to sumone in ya life who has died
shudn't feel ashamed about that!!!!

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thanks man, i just cant get my head round i, felt i had to get it off my chest.

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Nice OM daubs,

Like i said before My condollances to Lauren

good wordplay, vocab skills, emotion, flow, structure, overall deliverance

tight drop man, hate to say tight drop, considering what it is standing for but.. well you know what im gettin at


holla

bone, close this i done a proper one. thanks for feed.

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