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mR iKiLL. 0 0%
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Old 05-14-06, 05:26 PM   #1
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mR iKiLL. vs Ben Dope.

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Old 05-14-06, 05:27 PM   #2
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Old 05-14-06, 05:35 PM   #3
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Old 05-14-06, 06:17 PM   #4
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I can watch you tremble n pain,as plenty punches pursue'em.
Its not that we DONT feel ur pain...just rather throw u threw them.
I'll smash'em with fist,Ur simple text will get shatter'd to bits.
U got freedom of speech....
....But my WRITES will hurt ya worse after the kicks!
An plus ur prolly a ugly fuck that couldnt get a bang 4 ur buck.
The only Altar you gonna see....
..Me punching an ur face changing up!
You aint fuckin with Ben,Break ur mug after gettin stuck in the chin.
You couldnt get a behind a good bar..even if Kim smuggled u in.
Its nuthin to win against this guy,Me create a Diss,Why?
When I could leave'em Batter'd..worse than whats cookin @fish fry's!


u dont get it then dont vote...
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Old 05-15-06, 08:39 PM   #5
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F or startes, you're not a rapper so im aimin at yo throat
U r verse will only felt in brail givin u blind votes
K illin With Every Sentence, Eat thru em like heavy heaters

B eat em off a boat wit cements blocks tied to his sneakers
E very nigga i battle is time waisted they caint see me
N ow I just grab the mic and choke em wit it,So breathe easy
D ont try to act hard, i drop bombs, so when you see my ass .. duck
O r ill take yo bitch and let her split my pole like it aint bad luck
P ussy you're nothin to a general therefore you dont exist
E ventually you'll get the point bitch, class is dismissed ...
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Old 05-16-06, 06:01 PM   #6
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Old 05-17-06, 08:09 PM   #7
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Old 05-17-06, 09:40 PM   #8
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Voted For: Ben Dope.

wow, wtf was that lame attempt at being creative.....that, in no way, elevated your skill or effectiveness of your lame punches

i'll give this one to ben, just because he had punches, some of them played though, chuckled at the closer

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Old 05-17-06, 10:02 PM   #9
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Hey it was worth a try ... lol
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Old 05-21-06, 03:29 PM   #10
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Voted For: Ben Dope.

UGH @ this battle. Ben had some old flips of old concepts and huge stretches for weak punches. Kill had ONE almost good punch which was a flip off the braille concepts of old and a bunch of shit talking. Both sucked IMO but Ben actually had punches, so imma have to give him the win. I don't want to vote for either of yall but fuck, I have to. Ben you need to come fresher and Kill you need to punch instead of just talking.

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Old 05-22-06, 09:00 AM   #11
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Voted For: Ben Dope.

Mr Ikill - Your verse was a verse for audio. There were no punches or wit at all, nothing to make this a battle verse.

Ben Dope - Opener was pretty nice, clever wordplay and I ain't seen it before surprisingly. The rest was either ehh or ok, but you had this from the first bar.

v/ Ben Dope
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Old 05-24-06, 06:14 PM   #12
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Voted For: Ben Dope.

Ben Dope.:
I can watch you tremble n pain,as plenty punches pursue'em.
Its not that we DONT feel ur pain...just rather throw u threw them.
4/10 - OK Opener.
I'll smash'em with fist,Ur simple text will get shatter'd to bits.
U got freedom of speech....
....But my WRITES will hurt ya worse after the kicks!
4/10 - OK.
An plus ur prolly a ugly fuck that couldnt get a bang 4 ur buck.
The only Altar you gonna see....
..Me punching an ur face changing up!
4/10 - OK Punch.
You aint fuckin with Ben,Break ur mug after gettin stuck in the chin.
You couldnt get a behind a good bar..even if Kim smuggled u in.
2/10 - No.
Its nuthin to win against this guy,Me create a Diss,Why?
When I could leave'em Batter'd..worse than whats cookin @fish fry's!
6/10 - Good Closer.
20/50

You had the better verse, you punches where harder and you flowed better.


mR iKiLL.:
F or startes, you're not a rapper so im aimin at yo throat
U r verse will only felt in brail givin u blind votes
2/10 - Bad, mad grammar errors.
K illin With Every Sentence, Eat thru em like heavy heaters
B eat em off a boat wit cements blocks tied to his sneakers
2/10 - Good for you.
E very nigga i battle is time waisted they caint see me
N ow I just grab the mic and choke em wit it,So breathe easy
2/10 - No Punch.
D ont try to act hard, i drop bombs, so when you see my ass .. duck
O r ill take yo bitch and let her split my pole like it aint bad luck
3/10 - Meh.
P ussy you're nothin to a general therefore you dont exist
E ventually you'll get the point bitch, class is dismissed ...
5/10 - OK Closer.
14/50

You had a pretty weak verse. The Fuk BenDope was kew. But the rest of the lines was played out. You need to check for spellin and make sure ya shit makes sence.


Vote - Ben
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