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VISION 0 0%
Wes City 5 100.00%
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Old 07-18-05, 01:50 PM   #1
Wes City
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Wes City vs VISION

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Old 07-18-05, 03:49 PM   #2
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Old 07-18-05, 04:00 PM   #3
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They say fight fire wit fire,
but u aint makin it hot.
death before i post is the only chance dat u got.
u aint advancin alot,
just another rap actor,
your so slow on reaction,
that u appear to go backwids.
ill eat u up like some fat kids,
that fasted for a week,
your the MASTER of BATING,
all u can beat is your meat.
to that p****y avatar that describes you perfectly,
a self portrait of wes city,
and he posted it puposely. go post your verse and let the beating commence,
your rhyming is worthless cause it aint makin cents/sense.
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Old 07-18-05, 10:46 PM   #4
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Old 07-18-05, 10:47 PM   #5
Wes City
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Fuck your dumb shit ill come with witty rhymes
Your getting speared more than Kevin federline
Ill bang and bruise ya an take you to the hospital
your such ASAP, you got beat as soon as possible
Your 1-3 there no need to re-wind
Cause if your the vision of skill I hope to god I go blind
You got no skill, ya talent is nothing to savour
You bring nothing to the table like an Ethiopian waiter
In the battle ya done, no more words to say
You couldn’t bounce back with flubber on ya vertebrae
The only time you scorin is with some middle aged guys
This battle is two one sided like rollin snake eyes
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Old 07-18-05, 11:13 PM   #6
Wes City
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bump.............................................. .
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Old 07-18-05, 11:58 PM   #7
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Voted For: Wes City

Vision-verse wasn't bad...didn't like your structure at all...had one punch in there that i liked and that was the slow motion one...verse was sub-par though because it lacked what battles needs and that is punches and personals



wes city-had a nice verse...started off real slow though...but picked it upwit the blind line which had me LMAO for like 10 minutes straight...stomach was hurtin too...from the blind line down you did pretty good...you win this battle because you had harder hittin punches then vision
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Old 07-19-05, 12:00 AM   #8
Wes City
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thanks for the vote uppin..............................
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Old 07-19-05, 06:41 AM   #9
Wes City
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upppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp............... ..
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Old 07-19-05, 01:44 PM   #10
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp p
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Old 07-19-05, 05:41 PM   #11
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This was feedback posted for Wes City

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Old 07-19-05, 11:13 PM   #12
Wes City
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Old 07-20-05, 08:47 AM   #14
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Voted For: Wes City

this vote has to go to Wes City... it seemed like Vision didnt know what he was doing. none of his punches connected and the rhyme scheme was kinda hard to follow... fukked structure
his verse didnt really make sense like this...
u aint advancin alot,
just another rap actor,
your so slow on reaction,
that u appear to go backwids.
ill eat u up like some fat kids,
that fasted for a week,
^^ WTF?

Wes city was all around better... his punches were better and connected a lot better... although there were no personals, his verse stuck out a lot more. the ethiopian waiter line was pretty funny...
V/ Wes City
 
Old 07-20-05, 09:42 AM   #15
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Voted For: Wes City

ayo ur drop was nice and so was visions but i go for wes cuz his structure was put on tact vis was a lil iffy but ur vocab was wack wes but u got my vote cuz of the structure and imagery.........vis...u good keep elevatin homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!close battle wes just edge ya homie......
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