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06-09-06, 12:50 PM | #1 | |||||||
The Alien Toung
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How we break it down Ft M.I
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06-09-06, 01:29 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 2B7A 2084
lol...I like the effort here man...But, you need some more rhythm Cho...
WHITE BOY! haaa...I like the lyrics and the flow...But, you need a lil more soul in your delivery, esp. on the hook. Woody is 1/2 black, I'm sure he can teach you a lil sumthin sumthin haaa...j/p man I liked this track. 1 |
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06-15-06, 09:16 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: EECB F471
like sed above...i do like the attempt. Thnk u for having some sort of recording quality. jesus...i swear if i hear one more 'shitty mic' track on SC...ima committ suicide.
before i start commenting...wtf is that thing at 40seconds? i like the beginning...i like the creative ideas u had in the song, very commercial type ideas...but good none the less. the flow was a lil off, and u do need to put a lil more emotion into ur delivery. u need more of a beat change for the hook...or at least some sort of vocal effect. the hook just blends in, which is #1 no-no in above-ground songs. overall...i liked the song...listened to it a few times...u cud easily put a nice bridge (after the 2nd hook) in here...it wud really make it commercial format. work the flow a lil bit, an thats my only suggestion. keep up the good work.
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