as times get harder add more salt in my wounds
scratching at the surface underworld send your goons
busting from the underground still you runnin now
lil s straped wit a vest never the lest forever i rest in piece
times get harder for my family to eat dig in the garbage to feast
baby at the bottom eating his way out like a beast
i come wit the sickness sicker then sick sliker then slick never no witnesses
lack of luck is what you get for fucking with my pistols kids
flipping wigs getting harder to live harder to give harder to swim
in oceans this deep sinking under water farther then slopes steep
my hopes creep a shutter in my heart beat spark heat like lighters in a dark street
my bark squeeks and echo letgo my begal touch my shit again and ill take out your naval don't think im able too smack your face through this table
your hearts un stable another fable from kane and able strangle you with a cable
to get a clearer picture no markings rocks sparking jusus rose and still walking like in the scripture rip your intestines out your souls the on on your feet
thogh mines paved in gold in slaved the nomes enraged by drones
alcapone only romed in two toned fans i screw cold cans like
like swollen lip glands between her boxers sex still getting hotter
hitting harder then the games of hary potter

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shit was straight dude had more potential then what it was but still dope id give it a 7/10 which is madd good your highlights were

my hopes creep a shutter in my heart beat spark heat like lighters in a dark street
my bark squeeks and echo letgo my begal touch my shit again and ill take out your naval don't think im able too smack your face through this table
your hearts un stable another fable from kane and able strangle you with a cable
to get a clearer picture no markings rocks sparking jusus rose and still walking like in the scripture rip your intestines out your souls the on on your feet
thogh mines paved in gold in slaved the nomes enraged by drones

^^^^^^^^Ill

just work on flow your scheme was off at points anyway keep droppin

thanx bro uppin....................uppin.................... ..uppin..........................uppin............ .........uppin........................uppin....... .............................

it needs work but it wasn't bad, it just needs better vocab as well as imagery. the flow was good but the whole topic wasn't really that eye catching either....rtf

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