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05-26-03, 12:01 AM | #1 | ||||||
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tough decision
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*Phone rings*
yo dawg-nigga in truble-need yo help man-this shit be serious-hes gonna kill me tanite-meet me in ten at ma place *phone goes dead* what a nigga ta do? bust some caps or let go let ma homeboy down by becomein a no sho? am just off of paroll cann afford anotha bookin but if a dont go a risk the disrespect of ma hood man when a was in trubble they were there ba ma side now when it tim to return tha favour a run off and a hide shit man ..a dunno what to choose either way theres no telling what a will lose ma homies are ma life but a value ma freedom fuck me this is some deep ass shit fuck a wish a had more time ta think.a need ta sleep on it But a only got ten minutes to decide do a stay here alone or do i get up off ma ass and fite before a realise what i be doing i be picking up ma nine shits buildin up inside me but frankly i just aint got tha time to rationally think- actions speak louder than words so here a goes if a dont ride tanight ma homies will turn into ma foes but if a shoot someone down ill be put in a cell ether way am lookin at it this nigga goin ta hell while ma mind is racing me legs be waling and whilst ma mind be pacin ive icked up the fone and started talking to ma homeboys...tellin them i be a bit late hang u tha hone..then consider ma fate am shakin at tha thought of prision again when i got my trial early a has sworn ta change but here a am in ma car wit ma nine on ma lap turned on the ignotion and now thers no turnin back the ride u to his house was the longest ive ever had i kept reminicin bout all the times that i was glad to be out of ma cell and im robably headin right back but theres nothin i can do now.its time for ma payback I stepped out tha car and called out fo ma boi ta find the door already open and some blood on tha floor lace is a blood bath ad me dawgs all like wounded i just stood ther in silence -how could i hve been so stupid tha one that foned mes was still breathing just a bit ran over to him quikly to see if it was a bad hit it ws fatal - he was losing alot of blod if i had only been there 2 minutes earlier...FUCK he grabbed ma hand tight and looked deep into ma eyes mumbled something unclear-the stopped breathin and died pullin him close to ma chest i just lay there and cried and to think i was gonna turn down this stupid ass ride i always said id return the favour someday so now its time to find this nigga..damn is he gonna pay FUCK the police and FUCK the jail this shits personal so am grabbin all the gunz and fillin ma pockets up wit arsenal athrowin ma shit in the back set and jumpin into ma car this nigga has ovastepped tha line.man has he took it too far am roamin tha streets lookin for tha bitch when a spot him at tha corner braggin bout his latest hits a get out of tha car and walk past him discreetly then aim f his heat and shoot fo he gets tha chance ta see me two shots and hes dead but his homies have seen me so a start ta run away but im not fast on ma feet then i hear tha shots and twos just enough theyve shot me in tha chest and breathings becoming tough i nver thought of this exception of what would happen a never ditched ma homies or went ta jail....... instead a went ta heaven Last edited by PleDge : 05-26-03 at 12:04 AM. |
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05-26-03, 12:33 AM | #2 | ||||||
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please people hit up on this shit please lol a hate beggin.a need some opinons
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05-26-03, 12:37 AM | #3 | |||||||
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Il piece Ma........Nice content............I liked tha way u organized ur lines.........I was feelin this..........Keep spittin.................Return da favour checkout my boy's Skiddlezz drop http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...4458#post464458
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05-26-03, 01:00 AM | #4 | ||||||
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uppin.thanks bash lol a sit and wait fo you replies sometimes..casue you usually tha first ta do so
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05-26-03, 01:01 AM | #5 | ||||||
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shawty that was sick....am feeling it all da way..UPPIN
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05-26-03, 01:05 AM | #6 | |||||||
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lol...............Return da favour ...........Peep my boy's drop.........Its called Projects too hot remix................
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05-26-03, 01:09 AM | #7 | ||||||
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already did ......oh no wait it wont let me....keeps tellin me i aint ogged in..tell him it was ill though lol cause it was
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05-26-03, 01:45 AM | #8 | ||||||
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This was nice ma'. You have alot of talent. Bars were even, flow was on. Imagery wasn't bad at all either. Some lines stood out more than others, and that's good. Long, but worth the read fa'sho.
If you ain't got my open mics yet, click my Signature link titled "Reflection Of Fate" pZ! |
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05-26-03, 01:46 AM | #9 | ||||||
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hey nice drop. this was some nice shit and i really like the topic. that was a good one. keep spittin....
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05-26-03, 10:19 AM | #10 | ||||||
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thakns man uppin
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05-26-03, 10:31 AM | #11 | ||||
Straight Savage.
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aiyo this was ill, you had short enough bars to make it as long as it seemed. this was hot, you had some ill lines and everything, stay up!
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05-26-03, 01:27 PM | #12 | ||||||
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This was a good read. Had good content, flow, word usage, it was good all around. It was kind of long but I read through it pretty quick because of how you wrote it.
"tha one that foned mes was still breathing just a bit ran over to him quikly to see if it was a bad hit it ws fatal - he was losing alot of blod if i had only been there 2 minutes earlier...FUCK he grabbed ma hand tight and looked deep into ma eyes mumbled something unclear-the stopped breathin and died pullin him close to ma chest i just lay there and cried" That was my favorite part out of it. I really felt it. You wrote it good. I haven't really read a lot of your stuff but I'm gonna be looking for it now. |
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05-26-03, 03:22 PM | #13 | ||||||
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thanks man am more interested in RBTL and open mics than just text battline for some reason lol uppin fo mo votes
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05-26-03, 03:34 PM | #14 | ||||||
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this was good, i enjoyed reading it very much
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05-26-03, 04:36 PM | #15 | ||||||
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Nice drop fam, wisdom in words are definitely spoken. You got some stamina too, nice wordplay and good topic. I was feelin this on tha real. Keep tha hot flowz droppin and rep tha WL. I'm new to tha crew incase ya didnt know.
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