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View Poll Results: Who Iz Tha Champ?
M-Jae 5 100.00%
M-Sixteen 0 0%
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Old 02-02-04, 05:25 AM   #1
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M-Sixteen vs M.Jae

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10 lines minimum
no dick ridin'
own material
lets go kid
 
Old 02-02-04, 05:29 AM   #2
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yea manz, drop when tready ill drop asap
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Old 02-02-04, 05:42 AM   #3
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ok look, i aint ask for a war but fuck it,
now you're here, somebody grab me a mic and a sick bucket
cos this niggaz makin me ILL
u gotta b miseducated like lauryn hill
to be thinkin that you gettin degrees,
u aint hot,
u really wanna spit son? then get on your knees
cos i aint gotta spit a gay jibe
u did it yorself
namin your own ass after Mary J Blige
or was it Micheal Jackson?
i aint gotta lie, either way u gettin a slice of the male action
i put every ounce of game in the mic,
somebody told u u had a way with words so u came on the site?
well i'mma put it straight Mary
who else u know that can spti hot flows in the month of february?
 
Old 02-02-04, 06:14 AM   #4
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This kid talks shit like toilets, he thinks the net's like a street...
Tear u'r knee cap till u'r foot kicks ya heart..
& u finally can step to the beat
Like hoe's love to swallow, this bitch like punches he 'consumes'..
Cuttin this herb' if this bitch was fukkin hanging from his roots like planting lumes
this kids ill, when skydiving naked from london bridges..
This fuckin d/r herb thinks he's gangsta, what? u gonna shoot me wit ink cartridges!?
He cant even count i sad lets do ten..he dropped 16?! homo there aint no u & me!
Damn u see this fag breaking more cups than that bitch dolly parton's puberty
Son u are done, u have been sonned..

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Old 02-02-04, 06:21 AM   #5
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m16....
ur name is of a gun
that constantly fucks up.
and that lines up greatly with how u rhyme
u r like a big horrible rhyme.
no punchlines
go read something in legends....
not to be mean but just try to elevate as much as possible.

vote- jae, he had constant punches
and structure flow was greater.
...i good grammer.
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Old 02-02-04, 06:27 AM   #6
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hahah u faggot, u thought i'd keep it lyrical
read the first post bitch, 10 lines MINIMAL!
thats how i know u struggle to fit in
when u went into ur microsoft word and got a written!
copied it, and pasted
nigga face it,
ur styles like boxing day turkey- wasted
what u want to settle for?
an out and out clash-or a play on metaphors?
i came to set a score
wit ur (not so) hard lyrics
u had to try and resort to dropping "ink cartridges"?
tell the truth, u got a couple more tries....
try and drop 16, u might fit in a couple more lies

nigga
 
Old 02-02-04, 06:29 AM   #7
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^What the hell u talking about?..lol, u ,lost.. =) .. it happens...
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Old 02-02-04, 06:30 AM   #8
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LMFAO u dropped a second verse?.. Herbivore...1st verse counts u fag.............
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Old 02-02-04, 06:34 AM   #9
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dont ell me ur fearin' a second round... u won the first vote dammit, come again. i wanna c if u r a fluke or the truth.
an who u callin fag, pussy?
 
Old 02-02-04, 06:36 AM   #10
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Yo drtop ur verse in a new tread , we battle a second round than ok .. first let this get closed, .. ok ???.............second round coming up after this one.....agree u can paste ur second verse in a new tread but after this is closed........
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Old 02-02-04, 06:38 AM   #11
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lmao @ sixteen droppin 2 verses hahaha!! u get an E for effort on that one lol. he did extra credit lol. this aint middle school dawg this is rapbattles... which kinda reminds me of middle school tho

anyway... jae definitely took this all around... even with the extra verse. sixteen's shit was way too basic. ur punches were basic and played. atleast jae's was original. lol

vote - jae

lol wow... 2 verses hehe
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Old 02-02-04, 06:44 AM   #12
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k dawg, take it as read, this one's one 2 learn from, first battle an all that. fck pastin the new verse, a freestyles a freestyle, cant take what i done said and spit it again.
u got it kid
 
Old 02-02-04, 06:51 AM   #13
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Vote - M-sixteen..

Just to be an asshole.. =)

Eat my shit.. Plus I don't want him to feel too bad.. He needs at least one vote!!

Vote removed, no proper voting.
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Old 02-02-04, 06:55 AM   #14
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aiyyo man, fuck that, vote properly, bee. its all good.
 
Old 02-02-04, 06:57 AM   #15
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v/ Jae

He had better punches, flow and vocab.....you were also more creative and come a lot harder than m-sixteen

sixteen....your lines were played (gay jokes dont make an impact anymore). Your structure was bad and overall you need to elevate....keep battlin and you'll get there
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