http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=561231

"This Is Life"
I'm 1st, Triple did the hook and the 2nd verse

Don't forget to leave links and shit like that.

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beats cool.... sorta shit Id use. maybe some vocals for a intro would of done good.

Quality's good, triple N's hook sounds nice. Your flows allways has that monotone to it and some what robotic, you make each word sound seperate instead of flowing through, but meh, thats your style, so yeh do what you do.
Lyrics are cool, quality sounds cool.

Hooks nice, triple N reminds me of that guy from DPG... reeeeemmmmmmeeeeeeeeembeeeeeeeeerrrr meeeeeeeee!!!!!!
done that track with slim, meh anyway, trips verse is good.

Nice track.

Listenin', yeah heard beat before shit is nice..cuda done with an intro with talking or summin...Triple yo hook is real nice...lyrics are real nice and I like how you delivered...Paranoid...flow is gettin better..but yeh this is still monotonous and robotic...it kinda sounds ure just reading the lyrics and thats all u tryna do nah mean...lyrics are decent cudda done with alot more multis but its decent, it was an okay verse but Ive heard better fam...

Triple's verse - thats wasup mayne...the flow is decent and the lyrics are real good too...emotion is good too, trip you also got a lil robotic style but the thing is u put much more emotion n u fluctuating words so thats why ure shit is what it is so yeah that shit is nice as hell...

Nice jawn yall

can you rtf plz:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...687#post2778687

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jawn is such a homo word lol
oh hell no i loved this song this better be good : / like father like son
paranoid i like your voice emotion was ok didnt really like the verse flow wasnt reallly smooth which affected the emotion and idk sounded kinda robotic but def getting better with it lyrics were pretty cool
hook is pretty cool
triple cool flow emotion was reallly good really lyrical like usual overall track is ok def not my favorite track from triple
paranoid one of your better tracks
idk it might jsut be me cause i loved the orignial song
id give it a 6.5/10

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thanks for the feed, uppin

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beat is familiar

Paranoid...I don't like how your vocals sound...You need a vocal make over...sounds waaaaaaaay too compressed...

Flow is on tho...like ur delivery...pretty good

slick soundin


Look @ Triple on the Hook...sounds pretty coo

Triple:...vocal quality much better...flow works...delivery is good


Good soundin track fellas



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heard this beat before its nice, i dont remember whos this from tho mmm anyway, hook is dope, pretty good, para this is your best so far, quality is better than before but still a lil bad, flow is getting better, dont say things like "i like my mooommm" (its an example) to fit in the beat, try adding words so the flow could be better, build your lines, emotions is better than before too, but still need elevation, good man good your beat, hook dope, then triple spitting illnes as always word, mm flow fell off just one time so props

dont track keep dropin

uppin for more views!

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