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m.I

ebircs

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LOL....

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2881045
vato

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234218
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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

ill be cool like him n post my lyrics....see if he can read into it on the deeper level....but prolly not.....

this is what happens when a faggot starts yappin
opens up his trap just to get it smacked in
o-y, no i dont think you have it
quit this act quick, fore you get your ass ripped

n i dont mean an ass rip like you used to havin
more like the type that fuckin caves your ass in
but im passive when i come at kids
cuz kids be touchy now a days n i wont haveeee it

n less i get into all the fuckin sentament
i mean touchy like a bitch, bitch your too sensitive
i mean we kicked you out...oh well, just fuck it
that was forever ago, n you still holding grudges

suck it like gen x, its past dude
im so far past you, its the second time i lapped you
i mean second time ive smacked you, have you
come to your senses, already i ask you

why you thinkin you got skills, you make me laugh dude
blowin up tito n shit all up on his cashews....
back the fuck up before i smack you
leave you black blue, bruised from what my raps do...


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n dont think im done with your wack ass rap scheme
you have me, asking, hows he think he has heat
punks tryin to punch with a line bout hutch?
ill say it again kid -shut the fuck up

this is the verse where your words get disceted
ripped open, showin every flaw that you said bitch
first off let me check, did somebody shoot me
cuz i was dyin on the floor when this kid said poopy?
whos he, think that he was, fuck how you figure?
that its fuckin slick to call a guy a gold digger?
this beginner need to begin ta learn some basics
face it, your not on my level or my element
you need some elevator shit
something to elevate your shit, hella quick
cuz i aint waitin bitch....ill pause then say this shit

i aint gon battle a one syllable scheamer
a dreamer, who runs to the middle of fingers
to finger his ass hole, cuz he has no...friends...
claims to be deep but face value is where your ugly ass hole ends

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dude..........his "ill shit on u till ur coverd in poo" line ripped us............idk why we even try...

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HELLLZ YEEAHH !!!!

this was aiight. better then his tho. But lyrically nothing stood out really. nothing to quote. But uhh flows were nice, so it was a cool track overall, I guess. iunno if you guys were tryin' your best. Cuz i've seen y'all come better. but it was aiight.

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Listen'n

Beats dope like the lil intro in the begin'n

M.I : ahahaha my dude everytime i hear i laugh son u got that crazy charisma bout ur presence...nice delivery on this crack pipe bein paranoid that explains a lot bout this dude... good lyrics man..concept was dope as well..coulda turned y'all vocals up a lil bit

Ebircs : Lyrics dope, nice delivery, nice flow, nice presence...you hit it all on this joint...like the concept of what u was gettin at wit this dude paranoid...only one this son was ur vocals coulda bin turned up some...u sound low...

Jay 286 : Lol at ur intro....lyrics sick...concept dope...presence collective...flow smooth...ab-libs really made ur verse shined nice....way to come at homeboys neck u was slightly off a lil bit on the last part of ur verse that kicked last....but its a diss so who gives a shit y'all annihilated dude...

Over-all
Mixin coulda bin better but like i said it was a diss track kinda like some mixtape shit but woulda sounded better if y'all vocals was turned up beat over-rode them shit...y'all flows lyrics an concepts was disgustin....good shit y'all way to hol' it down for ya boy Tito an OYD...Ratin 8/10

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yea vato...i missed one syllable at the end....oh well......uppin so this bitch gets to see how to get ripped

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P-Diddly getting ripped all over the place!!!!!!!!!


lol

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'

y'all must love me or somin. I dont wanna listen to it, probably sucks more then mine......lmao!

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he prolly said that after he listened n realized he couldnt mock it cuz it was better then his....

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