ok 10 lines min-15 lines max
no feedin or bitin
no crew,d/r,or hate votes
once u check in u got 1 hour to droop ur verse its a blind split
good luck

checked in, lets go

checkd in homeboy

I aint here as 50 to dish you a hug,truth is ive seen more thug in a chug
Don think yo a thug, cus yo bouncin around cwalkin n yo lugs
I could spit this shit all day, havin you screamin Mayday
you aint no gangster, ive seen more power comin from the KKK

Dogg i aint hatin, jus in this battle we doin there is clearly no debatin
heres this crip statin, that if you wanna be black stick to Fake n Bakin
too many frontin pussys tryin to impress, my lyrics are makin you feel pressed
im meant to leave you like yo mom, when you where concieved depressed

Nigga name (Eeecko) Ecko, reppin differents spit like he a full blooded Negro
This aint yo Hercules Colliseum Hero, you are stayin at "Zero..' to "Zero..'
Nice Bar Limit, n yo freestyles i guess you missed its Survival of the Fittest
yo battlin this forums illest, yo style is like a flame one "Blow" yo diminished

Lil Flip u gon get lit like u was a un-smoked cigarette
u trying to get warm but i got ur ass in a cold sweat
nah its not from adrenaline its from the works of fear
u thinkin u gon beat me is like hugh hefner turning queer
which is neva gon happin and i hope u realize that punk
u aint got shit on me i might as well cut your pulmonary trunk
cuz u already dead...remember when u fucked urself over wit that acid trip
found a famous rapper and came up wit a name Lil' Flip
or should i say lil trip whatever jus changed the F,L to a T,R u act so hard
but all he did was steal a cookie from his grandmas cookie jar
i cant believe im battlin the newb im jus wastin my god damn time
blimp gimp shrimp i might as well murder him wit a fuckin' internal Rhyme
Fuck Lil Trip ur name is self explanatory
i guess u name ur self of how high u get from ur weed inventory
if thats not the story u need to get ur shit straight
i went over 15s lines im ready for a dq..cant wait

aight, battles done lets get some votes goin...vote in some battles to get these goin...

Aiyo...Here's my advice:

Lil Trip

#1..Stop leaving spaces in ur verse after every 4 lines...it looks tacky and is kinda noob-ish
#2..use better end rhyming to keep your verse tight
#3..Up metas and use better punches

Nigga name (Eeecko) Ecko, reppin differents spit like he a full blooded Negro
This aint yo Hercules Colliseum Hero, you are stayin at "Zero..' to "Zero..'

^^^ And shit like that is borderline racist...WACK...and has to GO!
Ecko:

1..Good punches...up hardness of ur disses tho


Vote: Ecko: Better overall verse



Fav. Lines from each

LIL TRIP:

Nice Bar Limit, n yo freestyles i guess you missed its Survival of the Fittest
yo battlin this forums illest, yo style is like a flame one "Blow" yo diminished


Ecko:

Lil Flip u gon get lit like u was a un-smoked cigarette
u trying to get warm but i got ur ass in a cold sweat

Yeah...i don mind bein borderline thats still within boundaries n im meant to hit hard like it or love it...
as for the space ill jus do what im gonna do it breaks it down to 4 bars n what i do so im gonna keep it n i like what im doin n im gonna continue to capitalize on it, peace..

uppinn for votes

Lil Trip had me fallin asleep, all the lines seemed sorta weak and outplayed. Ecko wasn't strong, but he had a few lines that made me laugh, and some good word usage. Gotta keep me interested if you plan to get my vote, and Lil Trip lost this battle cause of that.

fav lines:
Lil Trip:
Hard to pick, cause i wasn't feelin the whole thing...but....
Nice Bar Limit, n yo freestyles i guess you missed its Survival of the Fittest
yo battlin this forums illest, yo style is like a flame one "Blow" yo diminished
Ecko:
which is neva gon happin and i hope u realize that punk
u aint got shit on me i might as well cut your pulmonary trunk

vendetta

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good job eckz. do the damn thing my crhymie! uppin' for these cats.

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yo im a vote ecko on this one. lil trip u woz aiight but shud have came harder with a lot more punches. in a ten line battle u gotta give it all u got so yeah. ecko juz woz on a different level than trip. aiight battle ya'll
vote = ecko

hit up ma battle with a honest vote
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126429

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which is neva gon happin and i hope u realize that punk
u aint got shit on me i might as well cut your pulmonary trunk


that line stood out...don't ask me why..lol...but honestly..both of you had decent punches..decent flow..decent all together...i can tell that both of you can do much better though...oh well...not a bad battle....but what I'm gonna say is..i think it would be in both of your best interests if you used more multis..and metas...but besides all that
i thought eckos punches were a tad better due to that one line...and the flow was about the same for the both of you...so...sorry..but i gotta give it to ecko....good battle tho..much respect and both of you stay up

Holla

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