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04-14-09, 12:01 AM
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audio heads and people who like to pick apart music
IP: F130 A2E3
i need yalls help go here...
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...449#post3270449 ...and tell me what i need to do to improve my mix...nothing dumb like get someone else to record or any of that bull shit...but i dunno if i should auto tune the hook, if i like the hook as is etc. help me out and give me some feed on what you would do to the song to improve it....thanks...
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04-14-09, 01:32 AM
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Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
honestly
fucking dope verses chorus - brutal i'd get someone to sing it for you personally, someone who is an actual singer and you'd have a hit...
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04-14-09, 02:57 AM
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IP: E28A EA13
listening,first hook you cant hear very good.dope lyircs,u can tell theres dubs,but not very good,second hooks good,2nd verse dope lyrics,3rd hooks good,3rd verse mixing and dubs are good.overall pretty sick
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04-14-09, 03:05 AM
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Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
dont listen to him the hooks weren't good lol trust me
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04-14-09, 07:43 AM
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I'ma Royal
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IP: 2747 4552
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word to this. verses were dope but u could def use an actual singer on hooks. I liked.
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04-14-09, 11:04 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: F130 A2E3
yeah im struggling with the hooks, cuz the song is called on my own...i was thinking autotune, but than again that might take it a direction i dont want it to go...ima experiment some more tho before i pass it off
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-14-09, 11:18 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: F875 0B01
dude... your vocals really remind me of eminem, theyve never really sounded THAT similar to eminem before just in this song... dont use autotune! for fuck sake dont be another one of those rappers who over use that shit...
you really just need to try your hardest to sing it better i think... or make it sound more solid somehow.. i mean its not THAT bad... it just needs work man.. |
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04-14-09, 11:18 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: F875 0B01
the verses are all good i think though..
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04-14-09, 11:20 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: F875 0B01
better layering of the hook man.. layers are the key to a solid hook.
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04-14-09, 11:50 AM
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I don't lose
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IP: F130 A2E3
its layered over 4 times already
i unno
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-14-09, 03:50 PM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: F875 0B01
hmm.. i dunno, maybe just keep practicing your singing till you get it sounding more professional... cause its fundementally a song about you man getting someone else to sing a hook like that wouldnt sound right.
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04-14-09, 04:22 PM
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Jack The Ripper
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IP: F540 07B2
it wouldnt hurt to atleast try the auto-tunes out and see how it sounds in comparison even tho that shit is played... mainstream dudes would dig it tho -_-
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04-14-09, 04:39 PM
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Better THAN You!
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IP: B738 46A3
yo jay. send the hooks my way. i have a bunch of pitch finding and shit to do that shit. if not i can help you or got a singer that will.
for reaall because i think its dope so farrr
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04-14-09, 06:22 PM
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I don't lose
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IP: F130 A2E3
ill send somethin your way soon for the collab, after that if i havent fixed this shit yet ill send it over
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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04-14-09, 06:56 PM
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Rather Unique
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IP: 81CF 00CF
I'd say on the hook do one main vocal and then record 4 overdubs and pan each one over L and R.
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