You search for the rhyme, thats complete perfection,
no error in a line, that needs no correction,
the vocab section is made with full complexion,
just started off and its heading in the right direction,
its like a perfect stock market, no recession to recession,
there isnt one line that is in its depression,
its got the ability to keep everyones attention,
all through the senses of perception,
everyones emotions will show this love & affection,
no damage will be inflicted there is no infection,
no need for a cure, or even a prevention,
because this piece even has its own protection,
its like receiving 100 percent in an assessment,
every answer correct, to every single question,
its like not missing a shot, without a deflection,
from every square millimetre, within its dimension,
its like becoming the new president,
and the votes were a landslide in the election,
its like having a new life from redemption,
more then just a recovery, its a resurrection,
its like having the perfect connection,
nothing can go wrong, without exemption,
its known as the perfect place without a mention,
this search of paradise is better then heaven.

please give me some advice, praise, critism or anything else about my piece.. c'mon ppl dont sleep on me !
peace out...

Dogg, this shit here is Dope, y'all know this is yo best piece yet dogg, shittin on all the stuf you posted before, this shit is nice dogg, I'm impressed, and you said u wanted to quit this game, well bruther, you imrpovin non-stop, keep this shit up!!

Peace out!!!!

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That's nice dawg,
I have to agree with meadskillz - this peice is your hottest yet...
Hard to find best lines but i felt these the most:

its like becoming the new president,
and the votes were a landslide in the election,
its like having a new life from redemption,
more then just a recovery, its a resurrection,

Keep rhyming.
Peace.

Even though you have the same concept AND title as me, this was still dope...not as good as mine, but it's hot...lol...

Stay Spittin.....

P.e.a.c.e.

haha sorry 13th apostle, i now remember ur piece on this.
but this was one of my favourite topics
peace out...

c'mon ya'll gimme some replies on my rhmyes..
peace out...

This joint was nice kid... loved wordplay and vocab. I'm madly uppin' this joint.

Uppin this madly for ma boy Unifire...asked me to up it, as he is...Inactive fo tha mo....Reply to this shit yo....One hot joint!!!!

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woah , , nice vocab dawg , , ,like a philsopher wordsmith , , damn tight ass drop , , u gon get better dawg ,,, keep spittin