rules:

10-15 lines
blindspit
done in 30min
normal house rules

both spit in 30min after check in

its a blind spit so feeding off eachother if either on of us happen to spit before the other

out

goodluck

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im checkin in

i will only drop my verse wen you check in

have it done in 30 min

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Look this is the apocalpse…coz u like my cock~on~yo~lips, tha flows ready to rip!//(1)
coz u the kinda guys who likes the dick...don’t get to close coz im ready empty the clique//(2)
throw a punch, u goda a fat lip…so do no tell me wat I can not see, coz you’re the definiton of a fake MC//(3)
your rymes decline wen u hear mine…my lyrics got vocabulary words u can not define//(4)
goda bat..i hit u in the spine, u fall down…u never saw that I was planning this…u r blind//(5)
im one of a kind…master mind murders through out the years…but still got respect from my prison pears//(6)
Its pretty clear…I got the 4-5 near, hate to see u in despair, so y don’t I assasin u while im here//(7)
but im not…coz it seems that u love me a lot, don’t fuck with a G, coz youll end up deceased//(8)
6 feet deep…that’s the depth you will see… listen to me, my lyrics murder any G but me//(8)
its reality…it goda be… jumped you once, and still you didn’t learn… who the fuck u think I be!//(9)
(Finish him)
Its ya murder…front page in the local magazine, respect me coz I own u, coz if u don’t these lyrics will be the truth//
coz youll soon see me on MTV inside a music booth…im da best in this game like base ball and babe ruth//(10)

i
already
checked
in
so
its
your
turn
to
spit

^^pre written^^lmao

its a blind spit so here it goes

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---------opener----
Its funny didn't check in jus "cut and pasted" his verse its prewritten...
no personals i asumme cuz its all recycled from a another site IR ima post this cuz its "bitten"

---continue---
u dont got a chance heres ^^ da PROOF OF THE KNOWN TRUTH
your gonna capture my rhyme bulettes in your PHONE BOOTH

this guy's an Actress, fuck handin u clips, spit rhymes that stick
u'd think he was a sick porn star the way he Demandin the dick

I’m ‘Taking Ya’ Down’ Like “Last Year’s Calendar”BK Come Hard?
This Kid Is ‘No Big Deal’ Like “Playing Poker With Just 10 Cards


------closer-------
to Curse-Ya-Spits And Have Ya *Heatin Ya Self Up* As If i Reversed-Ya-Clips...(verse)
Tribal will Keep A *Knife to The Middle Of ya Lyrics* So people will Know Why All ya Verses-Be-Split...

sumthing i keyed in really quick


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True to my word...

BK:

Look this is the apocalpse…coz u like my cock~on~yo~lips, tha flows ready to rip!//(1)
coz u the kinda guys who likes the dick...don’t get to close coz im ready empty the clique//(2)
^good opener, nice multis: 7/10

throw a punch, u goda a fat lip…so do no tell me wat I can not see, coz you’re the definiton of a fake MC//(3)
your rymes decline wen u hear mine…my lyrics got vocabulary words u can not define//(4)
^all filler, and WAY too extended lines: 4/10

goda bat..i hit u in the spine, u fall down…u never saw that I was planning this…u r blind//(5)
im one of a kind…master mind murders through out the years…but still got respect from my prison pears//(6)
^Your prison pears? (Peers?) Do you eat them daily too? This line did not work: 4/10

Its pretty clear…I got the 4-5 near, hate to see u in despair, so y don’t I assasin u while im here//(7)
but im not…coz it seems that u love me a lot, don’t fuck with a G, coz youll end up deceased//(8)
^ehh: 4/10

6 feet deep…that’s the depth you will see… listen to me, my lyrics murder any G but me//(8)
its reality…it goda be… jumped you once, and still you didn’t learn… who the fuck u think I be!//(9)
^more stretched lines & filler, this bar didn't say anything: 3/10

(Finish him)
Its ya murder…front page in the local magazine, respect me coz I own u, coz if u don’t these lyrics will be the truth//
coz youll soon see me on MTV inside a music booth…im da best in this game like base ball and babe ruth//(10)
^could have come a lot harder as a closer. 4/10

168:

--------opener----
Its funny didn't check in jus "cut and pasted" his verse its prewritten...
no personals i asumme cuz its all recycled from a another site IR ima post this cuz its "bitten"
^Nice open: 7/10

---continue---
u dont got a chance heres ^^ da PROOF OF THE KNOWN TRUTH
your gonna capture my rhyme bulettes in your PHONE BOOTH
^you said feeding is ok, so nice flip on his verse: 8/10

this guy's an Actress, fuck handin u clips, spit rhymes that stick
u'd think he was a sick porn star the way he Demandin the dick
^decent lines, no real punch tho: 5/10

I’m ‘Taking Ya’ Down’ Like “Last Year’s Calendar”BK Come Hard?
This Kid Is ‘No Big Deal’ Like “Playing Poker With Just 10 Cards
^LMAO, nice hit: 9/10

------closer-------
to Curse-Ya-Spits And Have Ya *Heatin Ya Self Up* As If i Reversed-Ya-Clips...(verse)
-WTF?! ILL ASS wordplay: 10/10

Tribal will Keep A *Knife to The Middle Of ya Lyrics* So people will Know Why All ya Verses-Be-Split...
^LMAO, one of the hardest closes I've seen: 10/10

Sick ass verse, 168, I came at this a lil' skeptical, but you cleared that up.
BK, your verse started out str8 DOPE, but fell off hard.

BK: 26/60 = 43.33% ill

168: 49/60 = 81.66% ill

Good battle. Hit my link if you haven't voted on it yet.

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i gotta go wit 168

flow was better
vocab was better
puchlines were better
pretty much every aspect was better for 168

gj

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yo come on dawg vote on this battle

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mmmhmmmmm
No structure what so ever
Ok flow
Punches were weak....
No personals....
Overall.........5/20
Elevate some homie





mmhmmmm
Thats a bit better
Punches hit harder
Structure was ok..kinda choppy
Flow was good...
Overall.........13/20


Vote-168
But peice of advice for 168
Dont do that ----Begginner----.... ----Finisher----...----Continue---- Shit
That makes the verse look like shit...
Thta style is so old... its annoying
But overall Good verse...Keep it up

BK...
You need mad elevation
Punches were weak...
All concepts were played...

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Check it i'll give this to 168 because its obviously a pre-writen from the other guy...........now i don't know for sure but my guess would be with a name and a coloring on my avy like that.....168 is a girl.....so when you say shes the kinda guy who likes to suck dicks.....that gives away that fact that its all pre-written,.....and then in her...first line she busted you out likenothing so you lost cause i show no respect to pre-writin bs....one

^^^^^^^^^^^^LMaO so true thanx dawg^^^^^^^^^^^^^^


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L's breakdown

punches - 168
personals - 168
flow - 168
structure - tie (both need work)
creativity - 168
opener - 168
closer - 168

OVERALL - 168 (but next time dont verse feed, thats what you did in the second bar)

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