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Old 04-30-09, 12:29 AM   #1
Jay Rose
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word preview of the new track im workin on

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cuz im so dope like that, no mixing involved or shit...just tracking and bouncing.... PREVIEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

honestly give me some feedback tho cuz i want to make it doper

http://www.zshare.net/audio/593893086b6d3c20/
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Old 04-30-09, 12:33 AM   #2
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the only thing is wack is the beatand the chick singing , but the rest is but pretty damn good
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Old 04-30-09, 12:35 AM   #3
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i enjoy the beat, but everyone has tastes....and the girl needs to be mixed i agree, but its cool thanks.
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Old 04-30-09, 12:44 AM   #4
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all this needs is some mixin.
its pretty illll.

its got a great feel to it.
no homo.

good shit man.
i get a mic tomorrow too.
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Old 04-30-09, 12:48 AM   #5
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word so you can finally spit that collabooooooooooooooooo

and this wasnt touched one bit, no mixing or anythinggggggggg
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
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so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
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i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 04-30-09, 05:17 PM   #6
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yea i could tell.
lol

just turn the vocals up and work that magic no homo. sounds hottt!
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Old 04-30-09, 07:24 PM   #7
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something that will sound dope when it is done.......its such a nice feelin once that dub gets added in and u hear it for the first time.....
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