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Shadows edge | 1 | 16.67% | |
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04-09-04, 02:39 PM | #1 | |
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Sten. Cell Vs. Shadows edge
IP: CDBE 76F0
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No Crew Votes No DR Votes No Feeding Due By Tomorrow Midnight
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04-09-04, 02:55 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
yo in the meantime you wanna vote on some of my battles, i got waaay too many open.
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04-09-04, 03:26 PM | #3 | |
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Check Check
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04-09-04, 03:27 PM | #4 | |
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lol.. ok im here, shits due by tomorrow night though.. i don't wanna start this until i close some of my other stuff.. hopefully it'll be up by tonight.
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04-10-04, 04:01 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
uppin for sten cell, this shit still on right? just check in and ill spit mine sometime soon.
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04-10-04, 05:01 PM | #6 | |
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whatever, here's my drop:
sten cell like bruce willis, cats about to die hard each time i spit a bar, i leave you scarred, n ego charred even if your rubber suit was on, my rhymes too hot to adjust to n even if my rhymes was a dime a dozen you could afford just two you drop so man trash lines you get picked up for littering while my rhymes like acid, leave a bitter sting bitch confess, you just can’t match the skills I possess i seen you get merked by herbs, this shit is just excess sten-cell an L onto your record, then trace 10 times cuz i got you merked with each of my lines
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04-10-04, 06:53 PM | #7 | |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
uppin for sten cell ^^ does it actually take you 48 hours to write 5 bars?
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04-10-04, 11:14 PM | #8 | ||
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This Is Why I Waited.I Didnt Forget.Im Eatin So Ill Post Up In A Few.I Might Be A Couple Minutes Late
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04-11-04, 12:13 AM | #9 | |
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IP: 75F5 BDD1
lol with this amount of time you better slay me
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04-11-04, 12:34 AM | #10 | |
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IP: CDBE 76F0
Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle/
I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow/ X-Cell?Please Tell This Kid Right Clicks Wont Get By This/ Bitch I De-Light "Nice" Kids' Brightness With Tight Politeness/ Kid Dont Fight It,Your Suited For A Bruisin Like White Tie & Tails/ Its Easy To Tell Your Tastin De-Feet Like Bitin Toe Nails/ Ya Flows Sloppy By Far,No Monopoly Cards So Prepare To Post Bails/ Get Use To These Bars Cuz Ya Locked In Cells' Like County Jails/ Hasty?I Post Lazily But Im Bringin In The 'W' A Lot Quicker/ Faze Me?This Kids' Crazy But I Crack More Nuts Then A Broken Snickers/ My Fault I Got Caught Up In A Movie.
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04-11-04, 12:40 AM | #11 | |
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Really nice drop man, got real nice multis but you gotta work on your punches a bit I think.. like I gotta work on my wordplay to get where you at
uppin for votes people ^
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04-11-04, 11:34 AM | #12 |
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My Vote
IP: D5EA 4189
sten cell like bruce willis, cats about to die hard
each time i spit a bar, i leave you scarred, n ego charred Nice meta, multi's, and a decent punch...good opener 9/10 even if your rubber suit was on, my rhymes too hot to adjust to n even if my rhymes was a dime a dozen you could afford just two Another decent punch...no multis...no personals....6/10 you drop so man trash lines you get picked up for littering while my rhymes like acid, leave a bitter sting Nice punch...good metaphor....10/10 bitch confess, you just can’t match the skills I possess i seen you get merked by herbs, this shit is just excess Nice multi's and a decent punch in there...8/10 sten-cell an L onto your record, then trace 10 times cuz i got you merked with each of my lines Coulda closed a little better....6/10 Verse Score 39/50 Okay your verse was an overall hot spit...liked your metaphors....work on using some personals cause that will bring up your punches....Work on multis...Your elevatin alot kid...Like readin ya shit... Keep up the elevation... Sten. Cell's Pen-Skills Of-Ten Kills Per Battle/ I Come Soft & Still Banish Ink Spills Like A 12:00 Shadow/ Nice multi's...nice lil metaphor in there...good opener....9/10 X-Cell?Please Tell This Kid Right Clicks Wont Get By This/ Bitch I De-Light "Nice" Kids' Brightness With Tight Politeness/ Hot multi's and a decent punch....7/10 Kid Dont Fight It,Your Suited For A Bruisin Like White Tie & Tails/ Its Easy To Tell Your Tastin De-Feet Like Bitin Toe Nails/ Werd....HOT punch...nice multi's....10/10 Ya Flows Sloppy By Far,No Monopoly Cards So Prepare To Post Bails/ Get Use To These Bars Cuz Ya Locked In Cells' Like County Jails/ Another good punch with nice multis and a metaphor...8/10 Hasty?I Post Lazily But Im Bringin In The 'W' A Lot Quicker/ Faze Me?This Kids' Crazy But I Crack More Nuts Then A Broken Snickers/ Hot closer...with nice multi's...liked it...8/10 Verse Score 42/50 Okay your verse came harder than shadows....U need to work on using personals....Your def awesome at using multis....Work on hard hitting punches...u had a couple but still work on your punches....nice battle though... BOTH HAD AWESOME SPITS keep elevatin cuz yall will be fuckin hot VOTE - STEN
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04-11-04, 01:21 PM | #13 | |
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aight thanks for the good feedback man.. yeah i gotta work on multis... uppin ^^
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04-11-04, 03:53 PM | #14 | |
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04-11-04, 04:17 PM | #15 | |
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Before I vote, is there any number of post requirements?
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