ok, no crew votes, no feeding off, 20 lines max.

OK Check it,

yo, i've looked back on your battles and your rhymin is shook/
you think that you can beat me? you must be kinda mistook/
you can't write rhymes, so try writin a book/
to me rap's easy as fishing, i stay with strong lines and a hook/
we'll just read your gibberish while your babbling on/
coz you don't stand a chance, only way i loose is if i battle my clone/
you say your $ik, shit, you really should be $ik of writing trash kid/
coz i don't understand your lyrics, like your speakin with an accent/
why does this hypocandriac think that he is "sick"/
when your nothing more than what comes out of my ass.... a peice of shit/
i'm already bored with you, you MC's be on that same shit/
$ik, face it, your rhymes are just fake like you got you lyrics from the matrix/
you ain't shit just don't even try, murder you is what i will do/
fuck guns, in battles i spit hard enough for my saliva to kill you/
dark thoughts, like my brain was made from melanin/
just realize that i'm better bitch, i have more intelligence/
your luke warm man, you really don't got heat/
you think your "hard" huh, how about i dip you in concrete/
ya'll iv'e ended his career now, you see how i rattled him/
your done, God can't even save you, and if he tries then i'll battle him/

damn... this the kinda battles i like.. fuck all the writing book shit, this was nice and to the point.. i liked the way how i coudl spit both verses and it sound tight, and not like iw as reading a paper.. aight here it goes:
$ik:i liked your rhyme sheme, it was nice to read something differnt..

Easily Knock-Aside-Ya-Punchez, like puttin' Doorz Nex-Ta-Fists
Like Dehydrated-Midgit-Bungeez, ya Fall-Too-Short for Top-Spitz
^ nice punch, i think you shoulda opened with it.. nice bar..

Fuckin' Shake-Ya-Cranium! Like Brainz-Placed-In-Blenderz
Ya Sequeled-Health-Moviez! Don't Come-Complete in Sickest-Enderz
^i also liked this punch.. creative

overal verse was about a 7.6/10

horus:
we'll just read your gibberish while your babbling on/
coz you don't stand a chance, only way i loose is if i battle my clone/
^kinda of played, but i liked the arrangement of it,sounded good

you say your $ik, shit, you really should be $ik of writing trash kid/
coz i don't understand your lyrics, like your speakin with an accent/
^well put together i thought..

overall verse was a 7.4/10

i fel sik got it, only cause he had more punches in it.. horus sounded better, but there was a lil self glorification in that verse, and not enuff punches.. both verses were hott, i just was feeling sik's verse more..

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alright check it...Sik jus got this Barely...cause he had a sick opener and good punmches

siK: ILL PUnches mayn i was feelin em...much respect...ur personals were there..but your structure and flow was bad...your vocab was there too...good effort

horus: you had better sstructure and flow but fell short on punches and personals....and thats where he got you....good job for a newb...keep elevatin u have potential

vote :SIK

can u return the favour and vote for this..thanz http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131085

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Vote = Sik

Flow - Sik (Horus, your flow kept changin through the whole thing...Sik, your flow was aight, but a few parts chopped)
Punches - Sik (Punches were funny as hell: Kids ignorin security cops was my favorite...Horus, you had a bunch, but only a few hit hard, the rest were just average)
Multis - Tie (Both had some good strong multis)

Metas - Sik (Perfect metas...worked great with every punchline)

Personals - Sik (Horus had a couple and they were extremely weak)

You both doin ya thing, props...I think this goes to Sik though

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sik got dis wit better punches and personals..good battle tho..horus nice flow jus elevate wit punches