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Old 02-01-04, 08:19 AM   #1
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Writers 101

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Superior Rebels Presents: Writers 101


You first begin with paper and a pen,
I had skillz then lost them, but will they
come again?,you ask yourself that question,
then you talk to yourself in a rap session,
all of a sudden your doin crazy thing just
because of your depression,and then
wondering if you will ever be profession,
all this stuff gives you agression.



As you start this journey to become a writer,
you have to make it through being a street
fighter,but once your done you can do your
work on writing and so your stories become tighter,
the hope light is getting brighter each day as you
practice,this is a real life not an actress,but wait
there inst any reason to worry cuz ur still on 101,
that means your dream has just begun,so stick in
there and dont back away,you gotta stay in there
because all the hard work will pay off some day.



No worries about failing just be endure,
you will make it there some time I assure,
all the skillz arent fake you gotta think of them
as being pure,dont be demure about your skills,
but you gotta make it over those hills just to
get through those bad times that give you chills,
it aint hopeless about becomin a writer you just gotta
think tough,getting there is gonna be rough.



You move up in a rank,
this is true and it aint no prank,
your still on 101 though and you
dont care,you gotta concentrate
on getting there,keep doing your
thing cuz there aint time where you can to spare,
try going to 102 if you dare, Lets just hope you
make it and do a prayer,you are actually getting
but you`re unaware,everyone that is helping is
giving you tender loving care,before I used to
think I was good as anyone but they could hardley
compare,but wait your not practicing your writing
like your in an affair with practicing and not,your
acuse is that you forgot,but that aint a good reason,
its like giving yourself a treason.



Its almost done and you cant back down,
you gotta be the one in the end whos
wearing the crown,everyone will keep
you renown,all your true skillz begin
to be profound,you will be reconized
by being the writer from uptown.



Your done with all your work cuz you passed 101,102,103 and so on,
and back foregone you didnt even make a withdrawn,all those worries are
long gone, for they have been crushed by your confidence,you were told
you could do it by yourself conscience,the affect of working so hard has
made you wrecked,it has also given you perfect respect,you have finished
your journey to become a writer project,all the skillz u collect in ur mind started to connect, and that is what gave you the direct affect, but there is
still more to go before you know how to get the right flow,altough you werent
that good long ago and now your writing talents begin to show,see I told you
that you could do it but you gotta do it slow,give your body a quid pro qou,
now clap yourself on the back,cuz there is nothing that you lack,all this time
you thought you were wack,lets just say your mind whent into a good attack.



Dont doubt yourself
Do not doubt yourself
Dont trouble oneself
Do not trouble oneself



Thank you to all the people helped me get there
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Old 02-01-04, 09:32 AM   #2
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this was okay...(I sound like Crdez)anyway,your vocab was a little weak..and floweed seen off at places...content was okay..keep up the good work????
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Old 02-01-04, 09:54 AM   #3
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IIght thanks...........this wasnt one of my good ones but it worked for me......
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