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Old 11-18-04, 06:39 PM   #1
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The song is at the top as soon as you see the page..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/hoopsmusic.htm

iv dropped feedback on tomany links go to find.. so im not gonna bother.. just go browsing the new songs.. you'll see some of my replies..

leave feedback improvements.. anything ya want.. just leave feedback.. -1
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Old 11-18-04, 08:40 PM   #2
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Love the beat man, the piano in the beginning is dope and the singing,,,wow, your voice sounds great, and your delivery is perfect in this man, there is nothin wrong with this, sounds professional,love your strong words too......dope
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Old 11-18-04, 09:03 PM   #3
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Shit this s dope man, Felt the deepness.

The Beat is tops, and you flow well with it, the singing contradicts your voice in suck a good way ( maybe I didnt mean contradict, But I really can't remember the word.)
Your verse was pretty short, and the song ended quite bluntly, ut I still liked it, verse was dope, lyrics were dope.

Good Drop.
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Old 11-18-04, 10:07 PM   #4
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Nice Nice flow was good and the beat was hot i was feelin the whole track keep that coming pzz ~1~
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Old 11-19-04, 01:33 AM   #5
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Dope Beat.

Voice is iight..... I like your flow tho for the most part shit is real smooth... Delivery is right on point for this beat... Lyrics are okay... Nice Freeverse playa. Feelin it

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Old 11-19-04, 04:39 PM   #6
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word... good looks on the feedback.. uppin
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Old 11-20-04, 05:56 AM   #7
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Delivery was picture perfect amazin.

eventhough it was freeverse

get on aim so we can a collab
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Old 11-20-04, 11:02 AM   #8
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That was nice as hell may'ne....the beat worked real good with what you were sayin...too bad it culdnt be longa

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Old 11-20-04, 06:00 PM   #9
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man this shit was pretty hot...just what i would be expectin from u man...ur quality is good...nice and clear...nice ass beat too dog...i didnt hear any flaws in here...so keep up the good work man..
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Old 11-20-04, 06:26 PM   #10
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wow............nice job everything sounded good.........

.........that was dope........
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Old 11-21-04, 03:21 AM   #11
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First of all.....we need to finish that collab.....lol

Anyway, Feeling the beat. Flow was cool, rode the beat well. Message was nice.....you seem to always try to spread a message....lol. Only problem I heard with this was that I don't think the beat matched your voice that well.....Keep Droppin
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Old 11-21-04, 03:25 AM   #12
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shit was ill man delivery and flow were perfect pretty fluent for a free verse beat was nice emotion was on point to good ish man keep at it -peace-
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Old 11-21-04, 06:01 PM   #13
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Thanks guys.. good looks on all of the feedback.. uppin for any more you want to give :P
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Old 11-21-04, 11:05 PM   #14
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solid drop kid......

cant say anything realy that the others havent.......

but the flow was deff on point...... and you rode the beat on point.....

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Old 11-23-04, 01:45 AM   #15
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beat is outstanding, ya delivery is is on point and u gotta nice voice n mic presence..how old are you??..anywho...Nice lyrics to this drop..i been peepin some of ya stuff for a while..nice style u got. there's not much of any flaws to your shit..keep it that way.
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