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03-14-07, 01:11 PM | #1 | ||||
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Tony B-Change It Up......IM BAAAAACK
IP: 0A27 A278
produced by mfkr, mixing thanx to A+ also known as the kid Vibe.
for all yal niggas out there with the same flow, the same delivery, the same swag, the same everything. mix it up u fuckin clowns..... Change It Up Links http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239998 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=240116
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03-14-07, 04:39 PM | #2 | ||||
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what up q tip....you sound like a not so polished q tip at the begning....you start to slur like carson jet a bit in the middle....thats not swagger....haha.....i find it ironic how you dont change up your flow much up in the song.....oh well i dont feel like you accomplished much with this track....
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03-14-07, 05:19 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: ACF5 EF13
everytime the beat changes i switch the flow. it's not complicated.....and it's not even so much the flow but the rhyme scheme. bla, why do i even bother explaining to slow ppl :S
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03-14-07, 07:48 PM | #4 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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Well if you did do that it doesnt show, and I couldnt listen to this whole track I had to shut it off, I just wasnt feelin' much of it and I really couldnt get threw the whole thing. No Hate homie, thats just how I feel. Others might like it though. stay up.
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03-14-07, 09:25 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 0A27 A278
Lmaoooo, of course it didn't show if u turned it off u dumbass. im just gonna hope it's hate cuz if not its retardation
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03-14-07, 09:59 PM | #6 | |||||||
Killin' G'z
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dude I have no reason to hate on you?.. I dont even know you, this is the first thing ive heard from you, and I seriously listenin to it for like 1-2mins and just got bored and shut it off, I could kinda hear where you tried switchin' it up, but the beat is the only real thing that hinted that.
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On The Mic I'm Number One...I'm Also Number Two... ....Because Homie i'm The Shit!
TheB.E.S.T Crew
TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE
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03-14-07, 11:17 PM | #7 | ||||
~Spitten Fire~
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IP: 48E8 2135
Yo man shit is strate, yea on the "i gotta swagger make ya back up.." that delivery wuz annoyin made ya sound white not sayin that's bad or anythin.....but ya man i like how ya rode the beat....at parts it got a lil choppy....but i like the switchups shit needs to be a polished and it'd be dope.......not bad man keep droppen......
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03-15-07, 01:59 AM | #8 | ||||
I don't lose
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IP: 3011 7E9C
haha dude im not slow....you just switched up what you were rhyming....not how you delivered, not the swagger....just claim you meant for the track to be ironic cuz it doesnt change up much of anything
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
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03-15-07, 02:50 AM | #9 | ||||
Fuck Parents
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IP: 0A27 A278
i changed the rhyme scheme. only reason i mentioned swagger/delivery is because this track is diff from my others
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03-16-07, 06:49 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 9E7F 937F
iuno man, didn't sound like anything special, but i had no complaints really, flow was onn off n ur vocals sounded too in the background, but otherwise, it wasn't bad, just needs to be smoothened up a bit,keepatit guy...
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03-16-07, 07:40 PM | #11 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Mixing is fucked up, beats nothing decent. And switch of rhyme scheme doesn tmean ya switching ya flow.
lay your verse three times, you vocals sound too thin and empty. Laying them three time will ad thickness to it and make them more "solid" Im'a speak truth, Im not feeling this man, its boring as fuck. You sound like your falling asleep your self just after the two minute mark. Meh, its ok, but I think you hyped yourself up a bit, no wait, way to much. |
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03-17-07, 01:08 AM | #12 | ||||
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IP: 1C45 DE2D
lol you lay your hook 3 times for chorus's...pffttt
n like i said, i didnt mix this only because i didn't have time to
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03-21-07, 10:36 PM | #13 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: 8185 8F53
this song is iight, lol sound like STILL DRE in some points.. flow is iight.. sound like somethin to make when u high though.. 6/10
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03-22-07, 11:16 PM | #14 | ||||
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IP: ADCD 25F1
is recording at 3 am equivalent to being high?
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