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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-07-04 at 02:53 PM

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Lyriclesolja has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 02:54 PM.

Dopeman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 02:54 PM.

This fool cant even spell his name an he claims to be a Lyrical SOLDIER..
Got me in his sig askin for tips so watch the tranformation the Minute I Mold-Ya..
a few lessons from me you'll go from garbage to hero..
but the second u act up i can turn you from a worthless peice of shit to less than Zero..
I aint de niro but i'm damn GOOD at this FELLA..
ya style is sour so i'ma lock u up for a century in the cellar!

(Ya know they say wine is swetter asn fresher when ya lock it away, ya know? ''older the berry sweeter the juice''...a metaphore, kinda thing

dont sleep yall

Yo ima murda this cat wit nun but words,
he got 22 losses dis is gonna be his 23rd,
cause he wack and his punches dont hurt,
and his crew dont got guns all they do is throw dirt,
he claim the he from O-Town but this cat is lame,
and when i run through your state it'll be worse than the hurricane.

aight not bad........
i just dropped somthin quick an the first thing that came to my head lol..
it was a lil lame, but o well...

uppin for votes yall, dont sleep

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

Voted For: Dopeman

This fool cant even spell his name an he claims to be a Lyrical SOLDIER..
Got me in his sig askin for tips so watch the tranformation the Minute I Mold-Ya..
a few lessons from me you'll go from garbage to hero..
but the second u act up i can turn you from a worthless peice of shit to less than Zero..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE OPENER AND AN PUNCH


I aint de niro but i'm damn GOOD at this FELLA..
ya style is sour so i'ma lock u up for a century in the cellar!

^^^^^^^^^^ NICE CLOSA MAYNE

SHOTTA-HAD GOOD PUNCHES NICE FLOW'Z AND PERSONALS (JOKE ABOUT YO NAME)



Yo ima murda this cat wit nun but words,
he got 22 losses dis is gonna be his 23rd,
cause he wack and his punches dont hurt,
and his crew dont got guns all they do is throw dirt,
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT GOOD PUNCHES ON AN NEWBIE BUT NO ON SHOTTA


he claim the he from O-Town but this cat is lame,
and when i run through your state it'll be worse than the hurricane.
^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT PERSONALS AND "OK" PUNCH


VOTE-SHOTTA BASICALLY HE CAME HARDER W/PUNCHES

LYRICAL-KEEP IT UP MAYNE WHEN U COME AGAINST SOMEBODY LIKE HIM MEMBA TO BRING HEAT "OK"

U HAD GOOD PUNCHES BUT DEY WERENT HITTIN HARD KEEP IT UP

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Voted For: Dopeman

Aight, this battle wasn't that great. Lyricle came with a little better structure. Dopeman, your lines were somewhat stretched, so you should work on getting your point across in fewer words. Lyricle, although you had better structure, that's pretty much all you had. Youre punches were weak and didn't connect, they were really basic. No hate though, just elevate. Dopeman, your opener was rather weak, I got the first line but the second didn't bring any punch at all. Your second bar came off more like you were scolding hm rather than battling him. Your finnisher had some aight wordplay, but I felt the last line could've been better...
Both of you need some elevating, need to work on your punches mainly, but my vote goes to Dopeman because his punches were harder and his style wasn't as childish as Lyricle's. No hate, just dropping an honest vote.

Return the favor to one of the links in my sig. Honest explained votes only...

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Can we get some more votes?
battles need to be closed
thanx
uppppppppppppppppppin

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Yo, this was just a dumb quick key we both did, can we get some votes so this can be closed?
i need slots open

p e a c e

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Weak, weak weak battle
once again it was just a quick battle with my homeboy
we keyed the first thing that popped into the dome lol...
upin tho, dont sleep

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maaan, this battle is weak, can we get some votes to close this shit?
it was just a quick key an we want it to be over!
upppin the hell outta this shit

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Voted For: Dopeman

dopeman booooo you shitted on him in my opinion
flow was choppy but lines=more effective/original
lyrical not a good overall verse...................
flow was nice but that doesn't mean anything
originality and effectiveness really lacking....

vote: dopeman

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