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01-26-04, 02:23 AM | #1 | ||||
PuRe AzN..
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A.Z.N Pride keystyle
IP: 8232 A2A8
hey ill drop it like that, like that?
when i do it like this you will scat boy sittin and chillin after that, ill chat boy A-Z-N represent and im still in it ill spit it man ill split it man, and i ment it man im mudd and muck cuz u knee deep in it man destroy and devour you like asian with rice yah im a tough guy but im still sorta nice im cool as ice but im still pretty tight like mice im hard to catch but i still rep da A...Z...N till I Die yeah till death and yes i will kill ya none the less eatin eggrolls bitch u eatin some 2 not stuft with pork they stuft wit chu ill murder cats stay fresh and clean like outkast... asian are nice but........ can be mean soo diss the slanted eyes bitch dont matta cuz if we roll thru.. shit i alredy hear ya teeth chatta
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01-26-04, 02:59 AM | #2 | ||||
PuRe AzN..
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IP: 8232 A2A8
up..
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01-26-04, 04:05 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 5C4B 9DFC
^ errr... you need to elevate... quick....
you had no vocabulary, no multis, half your verse didnt rhyme, and for something as simple as "im the best" you couldnt stay on topic... all i can say is elevate da A...Z...N till I Die yeah till death dont use helper words... "yeah till death"... it makes you look like you couldnt think of anything else that rhymes |
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01-26-04, 07:11 AM | #4 | |||||||
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i agree you need to focus more on the topic... ya drifted a bit... and the scheme was very basic... start using some internals n multis... upp the vocab and be more expressive....
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01-26-04, 09:15 AM | #5 | ||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4577 CD9A
I'm asian my self..and this was very weak..your content was weak..vocab was worse..flow choppy..you need to elevate..peace..
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01-26-04, 10:39 AM | #6 | |||
"The Eleete"
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IP: FAD9 BD2A
You heard everyone else..........you need to elevate dawg but nonetheless you will only get better with time........peace
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