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Old 10-03-05, 12:40 PM   #1
FaMe
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Death In The Family (J Roc Diss)

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this kid be messin wit me, so i hada slaughter him punch after punch after punch...tell me what you think..its on my myspace

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cf...BBFA88118377043


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2468937

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2468943
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Old 10-03-05, 07:32 PM   #2
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lets not sleep on this shall weee
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Old 10-03-05, 09:49 PM   #3
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listening....

intro is ok...its not real funny or nothin.........but its ok.....

quality is not so good.....

ehh @ lyrics....a lot of em are kinda basic really....you need to up the lyrics for real.....

im not really feeling your voice....

your delivery is weird......its aright......

overall....im not really impressed man...for a diss track....this was ok....

let your voice come out more natural......its seems like your trying to change it up.......just let it be natural....


PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR.....on my song FireMan.........itd be appreciated
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Old 10-03-05, 09:56 PM   #4
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mayb i should have provided a pic so you see the guy..so you get some of the punches...i respect what you think, it all good

uppin
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Old 10-03-05, 10:19 PM   #5
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be sure to return the favor.......
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