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One M.B. 5 100.00%
Kesse 0 0%
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Old 03-07-05, 07:08 PM   #1
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One M.B. vs Kesse

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Old 03-07-05, 08:10 PM   #2
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Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 08:10 PM.
 
Old 03-07-05, 08:28 PM   #3
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one man in your band...well i'd think differently after seeing your battles
had so many dick riders voting, probly had their own personalized saddles
revoulutionary?....what next, you going to claim that your dog can purr
well in a sense you did change the site, everyone knew what whack multies were
says your from heaven, thats because your RV days are over with...expired
tryin to come back? but you need skill, and i dont think that was ever acquired
this battle wont be close, like a blind man hitting a target with a bow n' arrow
its like your writing all your verses in hyroglyphics, but shit, you aint no pharoah
its obvious why your called One MB, when it comes to you, nobody really cares
how do i know? just look at your sig, even jimi looks disappointed to be there
you may be the multi-master, but sooner or later, your title will get stripped
you can keep it for now, im not one for multies, just here to give you an ass-whip
i can tell your nervous, so ill finish this up leaving your mouth tasting salty
but take this loss positive, just learned that battles can be won without using multies
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*gl yo.....haha, i'll be stoaked just to get 1 vote! ....word
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Old 03-07-05, 08:33 PM   #4
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One M.B. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-07-05 08:33 PM.
 
Old 03-07-05, 08:41 PM   #5
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Catching a beat down as I break you into pieces like a kit kat
Just one round, screw the chit-chat, rap called, and it wants its shit back
This whole battle was a mismatch… Fuck you, and fuck a fight, bitch
You just cant hang with me……..…. Cos ya hung like a light switch
Im bright, kid…Ill leave ya sun burnt… i got you shook in sections,
You’ll have a redneck…. Like cats that supported the bush election
you call me a tyrant 'n shit, but im the illest with rhymin 'n spits,
I don’t need to try to spit sick… cos half this damn site is ridin my dick,
i could sit here all day, dissin on K, 'n straight harrassin him,
But ill let up…'cos like playin truth or dare, ya games embarrassin..
When I made a call out I didn’t expect some wack kids reply..
And I cant use personals…….. cos who the fuck is this guy?
ya shit to diss, no punches….. there aint no teachin this slob,
you like a door salesman.. ya only way to success is reachin fa knobs,
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Old 03-07-05, 09:01 PM   #6
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Voted For: One M.B.

Kesse
structure was alright.. some of your lines were stretched though.. flow fell off a little due to the stretchness.. you had a few multis.. wordplay was alright at times.. some of your concepts were decent, some were below average.. a few of your punches connected.. you had a good personal in there..

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revoulutionary?....what next, you going to claim that your dog can purr
well in a sense you did change the site, everyone knew what whack multies were
you may be the multi-master, but sooner or later, your title will get stripped
you can keep it for now, im not one for multies, just here to give you an ass-whip

One M.B.
structure is good.. flow is on target.. you had some nice multis.. wordplay is pretty good at times.. like Kesse, some of your concepts were good.. some were played out.. some of your punches connected.. no good personals..

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Catching a beat down as I break you into pieces like a kit kat
Just one round, screw the chit-chat, rap called, and it wants its shit back
Im bright, kid…Ill leave ya sun burnt… i got you shook in sections,
You’ll have a redneck…. Like cats that supported the bush election

Overall
Kesse had better personals.. both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. both had alright wordplay.. One M.B. had more multis.. more consistently decent concepts.. and more connecting punches.. so basing off of that.. this was a pretty good battle, but i have One M.B. taking it..

VOTE - ONE M.B.

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Old 03-07-05, 09:06 PM   #7
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^ well, that was quik.........haha, giddy..........
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Old 03-07-05, 09:21 PM   #8
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^ First new text battle i saw open in this forum.

Word.
 
Old 03-07-05, 11:08 PM   #9
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This was feedback posted for Kesse

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Checking the polls....

*gl yo.....haha, i'll be stoaked just to get 1 vote! ....word

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Old 03-08-05, 11:13 AM   #10
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just checking pollz
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Old 03-08-05, 02:43 PM   #11
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.........up...de la fuck...................bitches
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Old 03-08-05, 08:48 PM   #12
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Old 03-08-05, 10:22 PM   #13
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Voted For: One M.B.

ya'll got your own style that works... i dont know which way to go so imma just check the polls

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Old 03-09-05, 04:44 AM   #14
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Word I dont think I need to explain this one.. OMB got it without a doubt.. Kesse...........Most your lines were as stretched as a nympho commin out of a gangbang.. And you forced rhymes a lot.. Shit didnt flow..

Thats pretty much all I gotta say so for the remainder of this vote I will randomly press keys on my keyboard..

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That will be all.. Thankyou..

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Old 03-09-05, 12:52 PM   #15
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