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View Poll Results: How is you overall opinion on the verse?
IT was straight as @#$%..hope to hear more from you 1 33.33%
It was mad decent... I like the stroy behind it 2 66.67%
It was alright...needed some more work 0 0%
I didnt really like it 0 0%
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Old 05-17-05, 04:52 PM   #1
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This is for a homie who got stabbed and died. He died a Folk . R.I.P .

I got a visit from the devil last night.
He tucked me in, layed beside me , kissed me, and held me tight.
Whispered sweet thoughts about monsters and demons
Said hed never hurt me , so i chose to believe him.
He told me that the world was gunna end the next day,
and that if i became his wife my family and i would stay
that we would live on earth in harmony and pieice
and if i didnt well....that was the end of me
I closed my eyes, dropped a tear, was he tellen the truth?
remeba this is the devil , he only beared bad fruit .
he was uncouth. Was even really real?
you gota believe somtheing you could see and you could feel.
He never took his eyes of me he stared into my soul.
The next feeling he gave me span me outta control.
It got intense , lifted me to another level.
I couldnt believe this ....I was maken love with the devil.
When we settled , the sun was bout to rise.
He told me to make a decision, it was time to compromise.
"choose to live forver or choose death.Say no now consider this yo last breath"
"YES, ill be yours im your wife satan"
the decision was made without a second of contaplaten,
Hesitation naw he began to laugh. "sorry to say young one youve chosen the wrong path. Your my slave now , and your families left live. Oh and the world enden tommorow.....that was a minor fib.A gift to the underworld, queen of the gone. Youll never see another happy day this will end a sad song"
My husband is evil, and king of the dead. Thats why ill always say .
"NEVER TRUST NO ONE WHO REPS RED."
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Old 05-17-05, 05:10 PM   #2
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Yeah I Was Feelin Dis Drop Son........Mad Creative........I Love Creative Shit So You Get Hella Points For Dat

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Old 05-17-05, 05:13 PM   #3
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Nice i cant be mad at this emotion was there it was a real good piece....8/10

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Old 05-18-05, 04:28 PM   #4
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Cant Say it Was The Best u Wrote But It Was Really Good Cuz!over 8/10
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Old 05-18-05, 08:38 PM   #5
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that was sum creative shit,that could be a good movie of sum sort.
I like tha lines-I closed my eyes, dropped a tear, was he tellen the truth?
remeba this is the devil , he only beared bad fruit .

that was nice,cuz u were debating with good vs evil.

hey,Nice drop

9/10 good an graphic!!
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