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03-13-03, 12:59 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Sedulous Hours
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Repressed Inside This Coerce Village Under An Iron Boot
Flying Fluke Up A Plastic Flag Pole Of This Crying Muse Forcing This Wheel Barrow, Wit Swag To Tha Eye-Brow Over Tha Antisocial Summit Constructed By An Abject Of Tha Town Tha Rapt Of Tha Found Would Rather Be Left To Itself So It Can Enumerate Tha Corruption From Tha Induction Of Wealth Through Tha Destruction Of Help, I Cower Clutching Tha Hope Hostility Caught In Tha Throat Is Reserved For Tha Rope Never Could You Hang An Aeratred Man, Accuracy Erroneous Waft Away Frozen Mist With Open Fists Of Tha Dires Holiest Its Like I Hear Footsteps Of Tha Wheelchair Ridden 5 Month Excursion To Tha South Pole Just To Return What I Was Given An Empty Matchbox And Tha Wings Of A Fallen Angel No Use To A Chain Smoker Who Looks Towards Tha Infernal Fanals I Color Tha Walls Of Protection Wit Half Bitten Crayons And A Single Stick Of Charcoal From A Burnt Down Craddle I Etch A Bigotry Feasible Plan On Tha Palm Of My Hand But Perspiration Smudged Tha Layout, Im Left Wit One Strand One Approach Submerged By Tha Black Clouds Of Tha Untracable Soul Of Tha Deepest Pit Means My Skin Has To Be Tha Fascicle Im Stuck Painting Tha Sky In Colors Ive Never Even Witnessed Refresh Tha Page To See Tha New Sewer That Im Fishing In Catch Of Tha Day, Tha Credit Im Finding Perplexing To Pay Law Has Nothing Better To Do But Snare Me In A Small Space Cancel Out Tha Fundamentals Of Justice Wit A Blank Memory I Discharge Tha Orbs Of Exuberance That Were Sent To Me Tha Monotonous Streets I Try To Advance, Persistant Holding Tha Panorama Of Life Into Reverse, While Im Here Evolving Rusty Nails Hammered Into Tha Plank Where I Am Still Dwelling Non Fiction Is Tha Liberty That Im Here, Sat, Story Telling Left Eye Views Tha Proclaimation As Its Reflected From Others Tha Right Envisions Tha Anguish In Tha Right's Of Tha Mothers Noble Maturity Is Tha Lucrative That Conceals All Lewdness Here Detectives That Are On Tha Scene Come Up Totally Clueless Lifes An Objection To Tha Relentless, All Belief Is False Procreational Demise, I Cant Help But Feel Some Remorse My Flight Plane Is Off Course, Tha Path Is Non Authentic I Was Driven Towards Tha Hedge Of Surplus By An Eclectic Failing Tha Drug Test On Tha Track To Rambling Exhaultion Jumping Over Tha Pond, Stepping On Tha Stones Of Caution Instead Of Fallen In, Getting Wet, And Deliberating Over Hours I'd Rather Stand Out In A Storm And Get Drenched By Tha Shower Glower Upon Existence.. ..As A Youth Taught Within Tha Fine Line Of Obedience Why Try When Tha Ingreediants Of Life Are Tha Seeds Of Hurt Proceeding Immediate Beyond Tha Prime Of A Jubilant Status Fusing Part Heart Breaker And A Forsaken Scarlet Chaser Into One Physical Form, Sworn On Redemption Till Dawn But Tha Dawning Of Tha Morning Is Really What Torn Him Emotions And Feelings I Was Storing Are Now Brought Forward Caught Fraudulent, But Only As A Front To This Torment A Blunt Drawing Of Soiled Events Dripped From A Poison Pen Of Tha Moments When Death Was Rated Above A Perfect Ten This Was Tha Star Prize Captured On My Mantle Piece One Of My Random Streaks That I Experience More Like Feats Four To Greet, This Turmoil Has Me As Multi Personalities Attempting To Raise Tha Bar As I Hold On Tight To My Sanity Family Portrait With Missing Pieces, Upon Achieving Completion I Have To Settle For A Table Cloth Family Without Any Reason This Boxset Was Sold Illegally To Me With No License Shown How Can I Find Tha Rest Of Tha Heads When I Cant Even Find My Own? I Throw A Search For Tha Lost Appearences In Hope Of Opium In Hope Of Cloaking My Repulsion In Something Thats Less Devoting But At Best Its Revolting Tha Way My Perception Is Evolving And My Family Effection Is Dissolving Into This Sorrow Im Gulping Sorry Im Eroding, From Tha Word Go I Wasn't Suited For This So I Used Tha G From It To Do Some Glaring Into Tha O Of Tha Odd Abyss I Only Exist Through Forgotten Twists In Tha Midst Of Genes Even Through Tha Female Pleasure I Couldn't Stick To Dreams I Cant Stitch Tha Seams Of Cloud Nine, Trying To Find Time So I Can Rewind Tha Process And Progress Beyond Tha Lime Light But Below That Level Everyone's Looking Up With Green Irises Except Me, Raise My Eyes To Heaven Looking For Tha Timing I Missed So I Can Silently List Tha Gifts I Need To Share With People My Motivation In This Script Is Me Preparing To Be Equal |
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03-13-03, 08:29 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: D27D 0B18
"Its Like I Hear Footsteps Of Tha Wheelchair Ridden"
"I Color Tha Walls Of Protection Wit Half Bitten Crayons" "Jumping Over Tha Pond, Stepping On Tha Stones Of Caution" Those where some the best lines of the first verse, Haven't read the second yet, but I will... Good piece. |
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03-15-03, 06:55 AM | #3 | |||||||
.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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IP: D54B 13B3
You're one complex cat N-Demik, one of the, if not the most clever rhymers out here, I still havn't read the whole thing, its a long piece, but what i have read is crazy dogg, keep the shit comin!!
Peace Out!!!!
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03-16-03, 09:48 AM | #4 | ||||||
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Thanks For Tha Appreciation You Two
Now Focking Finish Reading It..LoL |
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03-16-03, 09:54 AM | #5 | ||||||
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Damn, Very Nice I Felt That Line A lot. Quote:
Also Very Nice . Like Always Very Nice Peice From N - Demik .. Took Me A While But I Got Through It
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03-17-03, 05:27 PM | #6 | ||||||
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Thank ooo Jae
Up You Focks |
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03-19-03, 08:07 AM | #7 | |||||||
.Tha Open Mic King.
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man, this was poo, poo poo poo poo poo poo pooo
actually, it was iLL bro...LoL... i needa poo thoug, prolly be a hangover stylleee too... LoL..this was on page 5 i fink, so i saved it for some more replies innnnnniiittt where u at anyways today?..im bored..!! got an open mic "party" round for muh boys cuzzin's burfday...weed n beer n open mic, let messiah get drunk n make a tit of himself fallin over. lol wanna go? jj68^...anyways...hole ahhh at me |
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03-20-03, 03:56 PM | #8 | ||||||
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LoL^
hehejj**6868^*68^*6868^*^*^ It Was Pretty Poo **Goes To Find His Noose** |
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03-20-03, 07:41 PM | #9 | ||||||
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This was a nice ass drop...don't know why i havn't noticed it...
Great shit...as usual... let's get more emcees like us...and we'll have a ill as open mic... Stay Spittin.. P.e.a.c.e. |
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03-21-03, 01:21 PM | #10 | ||||||
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Haha Word Apostle
Thanks For Your Feedback Bro0o0 |
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03-21-03, 01:57 PM | #11 | |||||||
..terror walks again..
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i was feeling this. words just poured into a picture. and like Burklor listed your metaphors were some of the most
original ive ever seen. if ya got time return the favor. stay up and stay evolvin peace
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