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Old 04-22-06, 05:06 AM   #1
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Odi et Amo
 
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Enygma vs. Jay 286

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Rules: follow them!


Topics: make your choice...


Tracks are due Wednesday April 26

Votes are due Friday April 28

(there is no rule about voting so far but if I see no one votes, I may have to install this)


No max time limit, min time limit is 1:00


Good luck and drop the hotness!


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Old 04-24-06, 09:48 AM   #2
Jay Rose
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checkin' in....
doin superhero...wid a twist...ha i think....ill drop by wed
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 04-24-06, 12:31 PM   #3
Jay Rose
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its gon be a short one cuz im lazy....n i gotta do album stuff
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 04-24-06, 05:10 PM   #4
Jay Rose
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IP: 9C2B 06EC

k the song is up.....

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3839638

SUPER DICK AWAY!!!
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 04-24-06, 07:12 PM   #5
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Word.....will try to drop by the deadline

Good shit by the way man
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Old 04-24-06, 11:29 PM   #6
Jay Rose
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yea you best not try hard on the quality cuz i didnt....haha....get at me bout the track we got goin tho....
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 04-26-06, 12:02 AM   #7
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Alright

Topic: I'll Be Alright
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Old 04-26-06, 11:40 PM   #8
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beat choice fits track cool
pretty creative track hook part of it is off beat a little bit
flow was on for the most part off in a few places
pretty cool track
e not sure how thsi beat fits ur topi lol but well see
lol i like it already
vocals are too loud in some places emotion is good flow is good
lyrics cool told a few different scenarios
enygma i was felling ur track more if you didnt have the whole all right all right everything is gonna be alright thing it wouldnt be nearly as dope lol i love it

vote enygma
but both were good
oyd reppin
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Old 04-28-06, 04:59 PM   #9
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Jay 286


Told you this in the PM I sent: I LOVED this track. I mean, yes a lot of things could've been improved but the entire Super Dick theme was just hilarious to me. It does show that it was just a quick drop but you got all aspects down pretty good for a quickie. Your flow was on point most of the time, lyrics could have been far better though (more creativity in the lines itself, the concept was nice though). I never heard your tracks before...feeling the voice and the attitude. I was pleasantly surprised



Enygma


Okay, first off: the beat annoys me till death but I will try to forget about that for a while. The idea of a hook is good but I feel this one did not contribute enough to the track, it would've been just fine without it. You made it too repetitive and you sounded bored as well. The verses on the other hand were on a whole different level. You had the right energy going on, the flow was on point and the attitude was there. I am not that familiar with your work but I did always enjoy listening to your tracks because of your voice tone and your overall presence. Prolly best track of this week...props



Vote: Enygma but props to both of you for dropping some good shit.
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Old 04-28-06, 05:55 PM   #10
Jay Rose
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yay...i got to battle the best track of the week....friggin sweet
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 04-28-06, 05:57 PM   #11
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
IP: 9C2B 06EC

can i vote for me so i dont get ko'd if not....none you other fuckers better vote ....just leave it at 0-2 thank you!
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 04-28-06, 05:59 PM   #12
Jay Rose
I don't lose
 
IP: 9C2B 06EC

and dq lyrics?? comon "batwing" didnt anybody see the movie waiting....ugh
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 04-28-06, 11:13 PM   #13
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Jay 286
and dq lyrics?? comon "batwing" didnt anybody see the movie waiting....ugh

The Goat!!!!
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Old 04-28-06, 11:38 PM   #14
Jay Rose
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haha....yea i didnt fit that one in, but i still got 2 points
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


 
Old 04-29-06, 05:52 AM   #15
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Enygma: 2 votes - Jay 286: 0 votes


Enygma wins and receives 3 points (not 4 for a KO because I set KO on 3-0)

Jay loses and receives minus 2 points
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