5 bars
no biting prewriting recycling
no hate dr or crew votes
bling spits bars are due in 30
good luck

ayo ayo look at this rookie bm316/he needs an mc fixing/u can't say shit against me sickning/i'm like jack dempsey busy/knocking your ass out/rapping fast i my crib, when your talking your raps out/compared to my shit/u can't rhyme with/me so i aint even got to rip u by battling u/...u get riped from getting it in your asshole too/ i don't feel like battling u now so ill put it on my calender for later/ cuz right now im only battlin chalengers for greater/ compitition/.............oh tell ur mom to mop the kitchen/ stop the bitch/ .................................................. and when i get home i want food on the table

I'm fired up and ready to rip the script now prepare to die//
Ya falling out this battle like a sumo trying to walk on the sky//
It smells like tuna or is it this pussy i smell//
Ya don't stand a chance like micheal jackson in the nfl//
Now let me walk up on a stage and grab a mic//
You winning is impossible like hugh hevner... turning dike//
I don't need no one else i'ma one man band//
You stick out in the crow like a mexican in the ku klux klan//

uppin on this battle please vote on this i'll return the favor if you minimum post is twent

Yo... my vote goes to bm316 cause look at the two rhymes.... well one rhyme one random spit

at least BM316's spit rhymed...

you all can see that BM won this... he actually showed some skill

Nuff Said

^^^^^^uppin for votes don't sleep on this ish right here

bm won this easy

danex you need to fix your structure and come wit hharder punchs and everything just keep dropin an elvatin and youll get it right just check other battles an see how to do it

bm decent verse need to elevate on your punchs and wordplay and try to be more creative wit your flows instead of usin the sam ol lines try to come up with somethin else

vote bm

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^^^ aight thanks for the vote still uppin on this

Ight man.. gotta give this shit to BM316.. i mean he had them hard punches and that rhyme sheme...
heres how hes rated
flow=7/10
wordplay=5/10
punches=6/10
vocab=4/10

Bm316
Flow=8/10
Punches=7/10
Vocab=7/10
Multi=5/10
Total=26/40

Danex
Punches=1/10
Flow=3/10
Vocab=5/10
Multis=0/10

Vote=bm316

hey g you need to clarify your vote you gave to me more detailed before it's revoked here is the link 1 just click on the edit icon located in your post peace
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=121316&page=1

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