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Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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A little keystyle poem i did cause im feelin emotions, feedback please...
the block tale begins with burnt store owners leaking from niggas claimin they men~ pourin forties in cups i begin slayin a ten searchin for fame through my pen~ sprayin through dented friends turned crooked by the pussy prize ink emits from the g-lock~ real and dealin in the gift called present i extend rap heaven wit eternal street hop~ my 2nd home stays raided often prayin i soften watchin my phony homie laid in coffin~ a black man caught by klansmen couldnt hang wit me between the paper's margins~ i..utter my ill awful words fly by gutters with chilling thoughtful verbs~ exit the enigma of life by an annoying slug and now my life and deaths perturbed~ dirty ink floods reality my heart filled with malice, g's~ as they explore this existence i feel the need to deny truth emphatically~ no need to ride wit a rebel with lost causes seepin his dome~ my words over weeded this poem releases my peace like a chrome~ the streets is my home but six deep awaits me as my dreams hit~ i dont mean shit i spit blind and rap about death cause with a pen i seen it~ 1luv. |
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Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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IP: EFC3 6DDD
elevation is key, holla back if any feedback could be given 1luv.
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Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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IP: EFC3 6DDD
elevatin.....comon just drop some thoughts, i appreciate it, 1luv.
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IP: E194 7957
i liked tha shit,it was hot, good multis,i dig ya style,i think youd be real tight in open mic but thats my opinion,keep on droppin kid,~1~
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Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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IP: EFC3 6DDD
thanks man, and nah i can drop open mics but my raps is a little bit edgier and easy flowing then my poetry i prefer the depth of my poems, any more feedback??? 1luv.
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Special Ghost To Blow
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Didnt Seem Like A Keystyle...
Talent-wise..Off The Hook... my 2nd home stays raided often prayin i soften watchin my phony homie laid in coffin~ a black man caught by klansmen couldnt hang wit me between the paper's margins~ ~Nyce Flow To It..Reminiscent Of Nas~ Nice Flow Altogether And Good "Keystyle" Peace |
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Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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IP: 4577 CD9A
thanks and yeh t was entirely a keystyle it took m aprox. 6 minutes to do, and im really feelin Nas' style he'smy biggest musical influence, surprised that u saw a comparison, thanks for your comments, elevation is key, 1luv.
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IP: E511 FA9D
i really liked tha last two lines!
keep droppin~la8 5gs im out! ~Pz |
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Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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IP: EFC3 6DDD
^thanks mama i appreciate the feedback 1luv.
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BANNED As Sampson
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IP: E990 EAB6
Nice Pieace G...U Got Skill Man...Tight Multis..Dope Verse..Keep Doin' Ya Thang...1
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Str8 From CopKilla Queens
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IP: EFC3 6DDD
good look X i respect your opinion thanks alot man, 1luv.
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