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04-04-04, 12:10 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Preview 1 and 2
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Preview 1 (Death to murder)
God made the heavens and earth, But then hell gave birth to the mankind curse. The 1 purpose for us is to kill and recieve that's been the way since adam and eve. Now I see the 1st part of my lifetime because the rain is being my only chyme. While I sit and define my existance here take a seat shut up and listen. This is gods greatests test for us human beings but the devil takes our children our hopes, and all of our dreams. It seems to me this is must be Deja Vu. Havn't before somewhere I'v seen you? Do you get it? This shit is just a method. but what I'm a say u better forget it. ah ah ah.......*left it* Preview 2 (1st verse for a piece I be droppin soon) Take my 1st steps up the concrete steps Think’n the past I’ll leave behind me like wet footprints. As the skin hits the board I brace myself Distance myself cause I’m only resisting myself. Got my mans dissing myself Tell’n me my habits be affected my health. I need ether to show a better reflection of self. “If you don’t better you’re human being, You might as well forget about your hopes and dreams,”. It seems that these drugs form an aggressive nature, 1 which consist of possessed dictator. “and if u don’t get the bigger picture you’ll fail. Then what…doing hard time in jail?”. Feedback would be appreciated thx Preview 3 coming soon...
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04-04-04, 05:39 PM | #2 | |||||||
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uppin for some feedback
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04-05-04, 02:17 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Now I remember why I left rap boards in the 1st place
up up and away
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Torn City Enterprise ^My crew bringing the heat 24/7 Soundclick Page ^Currently hosting 2 Freestyles, and 1 Writin Last edited by Lokie : 04-05-04 at 03:21 PM. |
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