You left me to die in the abyss~of~pain//
Was most likely to hide from your fist~that~rain//
Down so heavy that it even almost felt da same//
Like 1,000 deadly venoms rushing thru my vein//
I remained a scared child engulfed in da horror//
To face every hour witnessing my own mother//
Be a victim to abuse ~ what's the use//
Of pursuing a marriage if it's only ~ death in a carriage?//
Life was hard growin up where I'm from//
Got a whole family surviving on only one income//
All ma dad do is drink brew, smoke and fuck//
Any slut when he gets the chance and pull a stunt//
That he's busy on the job, and the stress goes on//
As a child lived on watching dad beats his mom//

that was tight... i liked the flow and vocab...
you had some tight ass lines too man...
say, dont post so many... the mod will close all
of you post
A.T.

thnx fo da props and iiight, ill try not to

u had a nice vocab, good cocept

pretty deep...
concept ain't too damm original... but still, I got respect for it...
shit was pretty short... could have been longer...
and it flowed pretty good...

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