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D'vine Visionary | 1 | -0.00% | |
DeJure the Raw | 8 | -0.00% | |
Is Divine Visionary A Fucking Faggot?? | -2147483648 | 100.00% | |
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07-22-02, 12:41 PM | #1 | |
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DeJure the Raw vs. Devine Visionary
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16 bar max. 5 to win 3-0 k.o. you no the rest since you claim to be all big and bad. Like i said i will post 20 mins. after you sign in but only if i'm on other wise sign in and i'll post as soon as i see it. |
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07-22-02, 01:28 PM | #2 | |
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F.Y.I's:More holes in cheezy emcees.....Swiss cheese well then here we go . . . . let ya know off jump, i put so many holes in cheezy emcees, i got Kraft holdin grudges// My metaphoric presentation of punches cease life lines, yours feel more like shoulder nudges// broken mentals leavin thins nigga w/ brain crutches, wordplay displayed in such an uncanny fashion, dawg i Punch more than Hawaiian// you claim to be The King of this Lyriced Jungle, c'mon dawg fibs are 4 kids everyone knows you lion (lyin)// Just stop tyrin ya whole style is irrelevant, if you fought the cashier at the box office will be the only way you get a fare(fair) fight// You scared right, predict nightmares for this sprockett, best cuddle up w/ moms tonite// I will ignite flames under ya ass, just to see you drop hot shit// played line but you still can't fucks w/ mine, i'm driving catz back w/ ease, you still earning ya learners permit// need a breath............okay back to work My worse verse leaves closed caskets at funerals, fathers heart filled with hatred off the words i stated// underated but elevated, created ways to keep mines sedated and freeze bodies froms souls vacated// My skillz are heavyweighted, this niggas like garbage on the trash day, it's time you've been put on the curb// i beat this herb with murderous nouns & killer verbs, acknowledge the obvious, to you i am superb// here it is dawg you got until 4:45 est to post or it's a DQ edited to place a comma in it's rightful place Last edited by Forrest Gump : 07-22-02 at 01:31 PM. |
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07-22-02, 01:37 PM | #3 | |
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Devine you wack,well ya verse was hardly-a-rap//I'ma say tha same thing ya girl said," man you have to cum-harder-than-that/ What R U doin"//suprised if anyone read your verse and sat-threw-it// I'd play off your verse, but thats tha only way i'd probably-lose-it//
you wont blow even if wind hit your cremation//forget radio,stick to sony, thats tha only way you'll ever play-station//.....yeh my words harsh,I'm not-kind// your name sounds like a T.V sychic, now tha only thing you missen is tha hot-lines//I'm not-lyin// think you tha sh*t cuz bought you a dell// well I'ma flip tha commercial,heres my version,"Dude,your gettin an L"// you think people care that your verse-redder?//or that you must flow-better,, just because of tha use of your bold-letters//.......your a herb, and you know its true//you could take steroids,virgen, i'll still get more cut than you...... |
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07-22-02, 01:44 PM | #4 | |
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^^^ ummm that's as hard as you can come...
dude you garbage, you even played off my verse and you still garbage. It's has been an eternity since someone fed off my verse. |
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07-22-02, 01:46 PM | #5 | |
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damn dawg i stay bout 2 hours from you, i stay in j-ville.duval county
And they say southern niggas can't rhyme. |
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07-22-02, 01:48 PM | #6 | |
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IP: F908 1771
were tha hell did I feed off your verse, .....your sh*t was wack,,,
you think you nice cuz you use big-words but you dont use no multis, or good punchlines I mean dam,you had to explain your line at tha begginin so people would know wat you talkin about....that ish is old dawg.. well i'ma let tha votes speak for them self |
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07-22-02, 01:56 PM | #7 | ||
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^^^umm, BITCH, that's as hard as YOU can come?!?!... dude YOUR GARBAGE, i've seen less played bars in JUVI.. and your STILL GARBAGE. It's been an eternity since I saw somebody as WACK AS YOU tellin' somebody else about themselves. Shut The FUCK Up asswipe. |
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07-22-02, 02:02 PM | #8 | ||
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hahahahahahahaha. damn for a second there i almost caught myself giving a fuck about what tha hell you thought. |
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07-22-02, 02:05 PM | #9 | |
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you SHOULD care about what I SAY.
Considering I have the power to.. delete everything you've EVER done on rb, everything you'll EVER do.. and delete you completly.. BITCH. |
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07-22-02, 02:10 PM | #10 | |
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Dejure i apologize, for the quotes will a mod(even you Adapt) please erase all the freeposts in this thread. it will be much appreciated.
a.] you will go NOWHERE and 'still be nice' YOUR WEAK now. i'd rip you 10 bars to your 20. i'd rip you 10 bars to your 25. i'd rip you 12 bars to your 30. so deflate your ego SON. b.] shotta does not count. -dapt- Last edited by adapt : 07-22-02 at 02:28 PM. |
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07-22-02, 02:22 PM | #11 | |
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0-0 then atleast you real on that much adapt.
And you talk about egos look at..................aww fuck it it's pointless to beef over he i.net about rappin. Don't like me cool, neither of us is gonna lose sleep over it. exactly.. i can have a "net ego" bigger then yours.. cuz i can serve you without trying.. goodnight. -dapt- Last edited by adapt : 07-22-02 at 02:32 PM. |
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07-22-02, 03:03 PM | #12 | |
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IP: F908 1771
need votes
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07-22-02, 03:04 PM | #13 | |
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Devine I seen you come harder, I ain't hatin. Your vocab was good but the betta' punches came from Dejure. I gotta give it to him cuz he did come harder, but I ain't hatin on your shit it was still straight.
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07-22-02, 03:05 PM | #14 | |
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1-0 him
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07-22-02, 03:49 PM | #15 | |
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ok..
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Eh, this was a decent battle over all..
Frankly Devine Visionary came out stronger with his Punchs, and metaphors over all.... His rhyme scheme was ok coulda been better by making the bars a lil shorter but still a nice verse.. Id rate it like a 7/8 for one... Dejure - Not bad of a verse.. Some of your lines had me laughing, They really werent that hard tho.. Your first set of bars were kinda funny, but kinda weak at the same time.. Over all like a 6/7 for a verse... Metaphors= DV Punchs= DV Mulits= DV Rhyme Scheme=DV Vocab= DV vote= Devine Visionary came out way better.. Had pretty much all tha aspects done were as Dejure didnt.. He lackd on to many things.. one Last edited by rar one : 07-22-02 at 04:04 PM. |
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