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10-10-03, 08:19 PM | #1 | ||||||
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[[Chorus 1]] [[Issues..Overpowerin' circumstances to the point of deadly incidences become life's 'Driving..Force']] [[Mentals 'Piss-On..You're..Every..Hour..Spent' thriving for more then just drugs, crime,death and 'Piling..Remorse']] [[Verse 1]] [['Overabundance..Smothers' with withering misery upon 'Covers..Of..Clamped..Lovers']] [['Another..Moment..Shelters' unwillingly identities of a fellow 'Brothers..Slug..Sampled-By..Another']] [['Unbareable..Consequenses' still filling me with doubt about my 'Numerical..Glock-Insedenses']] [[Sergical..Plot..Insistions' perfecting killings instilling 'Undismisable..Shot..Persisions']] [['Mentalities..Abrubted' by fatalities unjusted often violated by 'Authourities..Kurupted']] [['No-More-Of-These..Combustions' I cant handle these samples of dwindling 'Pholosophies..Destructing']] [['Abortion..Aposed-To..Supporting' no more faces of joy just uprooting emotional 'Touture..Aposed-To..Good-Forchunes']] [['Distorting..Exposed-Views..Compotion' no thought safe from social erosion or 'Uncordinating..Rowed-Truths..Organisations']] [[Chorus 1]] [[Issues..Overpowerin' circumstances to the point of deadly incidences become life's 'Driving..Force']] [[Mentals 'Piss-On..You're..Every..Hour..Spent' thriving for more then just drugs, crime,death and 'Piling..Remorse']] THIS SO CALLED DRIVING FORCE SHELTERS NO MORE THEN MENTAL RECOURSE,AND ALONG THE COURSE ALL I SEE IS BROKEN SUPPORTS! for........... [[Verse 2]] [['Infactuated..Youth' who just infatuated with crews, doing any thing to be 'Cordnated..With..You']] [['Surated..Blumes' later crawl to they rooms..swep like brooms, eyes forever in 'Dialated..Views']] Now, [['Obituaries..Pleased' to see its inventory receiving another member to its army of 'Anarchies..Underbread']] [['Semetaries..Dreaming' of the days a willingly body lays motionlessly in the dirt '24-Feet..Asleep']] [['Bullet-Proof..Men' suddenly find they not equipped wit bulletproof heads as they lay wita 'Skull-Filt-With-Two..Leads']] [[Still-It-Confusez..Tens' of millions of peoples thinking others unequal until a round 'Spills-Shit-Loose,..You-All..Dead']] [['Puberty..Pushed' by youth looking to grow up in groups of men taking on glocks leaving 'Communities..Crushed']] [[Insanities..Touched' by the youths that rushed growing up, n' now they just 'Instatutionaly..Clutched']] [[Chorus 2]] [[I 'Communicate..The..Worlds..Muse' for all you to see were i come and 'What..I've..Been..Threw']] [['Fasilitate..These..Words..Tunes' upon my lips crude and abrupt platforms for 'Unsaught..Lives..To..Speak..Threw']] [[Verse 3]] [['Surereal..Satements' shape this page of the words placement as showing the worlds 'Obscure..Nations']] [['Real..Patience' is of the essence to be able to with hold and 'Conseal..These-Pages']] of [[Ignored..Faces' now shown to all places threw my secretion of the mouth like 'Obscure..Tastes-n']] [['Unexplord..Cases' now blown into securities faces leaving no choice but to 'Fallow..The..Traces']] [['Imaginations..Reality', mental pictures no longer fictional thought processies but acted upon with 'Irratications..An..Self-Indulgensy']] [['Expectations..Of..Indentity' are no longer of ammenedies serenity gone and 'Inflictions..Thriving..Steadily']] [['Readily..Complacations' wait eager and anxious to act upon man's weak 'Immunity..Tward..Temptations']] [['Steadily..Antisipating' is deaths hand threw man forever participating in the act of 'Internaly..Damaging']] [[Chorus 2]] [[I 'Communicate..The..Worlds..Muse' for all you to see were I come from and 'What..I've..Been..Threw']] [['Fasilitate..These..Words..Tunes' upon my lips crude and abrupt platforms for 'Unsaught..Lives..To..Speak..Threw']] [[Now I've shown you just how the earth revolves no matter what news.. Weather you liked it or not I spoke all I 'Had..To']] |
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10-10-03, 10:23 PM | #2 | ||||||
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Dam...
yawl say u want longer..... i give u longer..... u give me nuffin but the sweep.. Dam... |
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10-11-03, 01:32 AM | #3 | ||||||
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that was pretty ill drop i enjoyed readin it and the flow was good the vocab was pretty good just keep postin and elevatin and u'll do well just keep droppin
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10-11-03, 03:03 AM | #4 | ||||
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Yeah i agree...this was a pretty good piece...it flowed pretty well through out the piece, didnt really get off track...your vocab was pretty good...your content was good too...chorus flowed pretty well i thought...overall it was a good drop...keep at it...and keep dropping.
and if you could return some feedback.. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=84642 |
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10-13-03, 05:04 PM | #5 | ||||||
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thanx fo the upps peoples.....
lol not to bad fo a 13 year old white cat... huh? |
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10-15-03, 08:40 PM | #6 | ||||||
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up we go.......
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