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08-03-05, 07:37 PM | #1 | ||||||
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A minute is a short lapse of time to blast a rhyme some
IP: CF74 5D3A
A minute is a short lapse of time to blast a rhyme some
Take an hour to try shower a microphones so they dumb You in the wrong life if you face long strife just to rhyme Bust mine on the spot and drop it like its hot and divine Some cats thinking clown and sinking down into stupidity A Town committee along with the mayor couldn’t be witty Enough to save them but they crave to stem with right recipe Make a slight mistake end up in a fight great with destiny Born with hope crook like a torn notebook my pages Don’t turn well |
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08-03-05, 07:40 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 0AE0 3B1A
Dawg..really this is your last warning..either make longer Open Mics and put some effort into it or im gonna have to bann you ..
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08-03-05, 07:41 PM | #3 | |||||||
RV aint Dead
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IP: F85C 13A3
u gon battle merkage
nigga and yo drop was aight
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08-03-05, 07:42 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
bonecollecter show me a ruule which shows how long a om must be or is this something you're making up come on man that's ten bars get off my back
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08-03-05, 07:57 PM | #5 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
maddrapper: i was feelin this a lot, good word play sick multits good rhyme scheme vocab was iffy...but it was madd good i liked it 8/10 keep writing, ill keep given feed back i like ur shit.......rtf on my om in my sig please
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08-03-05, 10:56 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
thanks for the props and critique on this one
my link(http://community.rapverse.com/showt...t=201962&page=2) |
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