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Old 08-26-03, 04:43 PM   #1
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[Hardcore] JayPana(6-1) vs. Feeble Minded(2-0) vs. [.Flawless.]

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3-way match

Check In By: Thursday...

Verses Due: Friday Evening...

Voting Ends: Sunday Afternoon...

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The Voting Thread Is Located In The
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Ok this is a special HardCore Battle ..
So Theres No Bar Limit, And You Can
Feed Off Your Opponents Verse also ..
Also, You can Get Your Buddies To
Help You Win, For Example you Can
Get a Friend To Write a Verse Dissing
Your Opponent, And You Post it With
Yours .. Thats Explains It All, You Can
Post Pix Of your Opponents If They
Have Them, And Use It As a Advantage .
 
Old 08-26-03, 05:23 PM   #2
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Jay Panas buddies are better than mine. . guess im screwed. lol.
im not wantin buddies to help. . fuck that.
oh this is feeble on another sn i like havin diff names 4 sum reason. . checkin in. good luck . .
 
Old 08-26-03, 05:24 PM   #3
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checkin in...

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Old 08-26-03, 06:25 PM   #4
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Checking In..

Sureal Will Rip Your Heads Off And Eat Them With Ketchup..
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Old 08-27-03, 04:02 PM   #5
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things to know.
jay pana is knuckle head
flawless is sureal...
flawless initials are FL
jays are JP...duh....

and here, they get ripped.
time for my title shot
read it all its not long.

uhh, let us see. . im over head & i dont mean projection screens!
just met with me. . but im takin my dawgs out. . for pedigrees!
we know FL's wack. . and im not talkin bout an rb battle league
& why fukin rap! when head admits hes a nerd in his avvy, geek!
tragically, Flaw knows my greatest punch is the fact he showed!
crackin d's hoes, except his prob wit flaws, we're practically foes.
set the scene, realized they aint dope & will get help to write
knuckles like a computer technician. . he helps himself to bytes!
yelp in fright, knuckles an old vet!.. saw him in a retirement home
& flawless is named that. .cuz i hit him same spot in a firing zone!
liars groan.. they tire then quit. . like slowly deflatin wheels : )
think i cn get 1st 2nd n 3rd? oppurtunity awaits like d navy seals
state d real, sureals only seen battle fields at a football game!
and knuckle head? wont bother he still rockin a rookies name. .
& how can i take u serious pana.. when JP means jus playin?
ill just end it here. .& stop the violence. . enough slaying. .
sike!. . cuz at ya door oppurtunity came knocking. . you out!
both sureal & knuckle moved in for the win. . then moved out. .

that is all i am writing. plz dont write more.

oh sureals from column says "battle field"

have fun feeding
 
Old 08-28-03, 11:46 PM   #6
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*...Dark Stage...*

*Chrit Pops Out Of The Shadows*

Feebles wack just ask around... The first sign of a problem is denial/
Maybe thats why this little bitch is trying to jack Chrit's style/
This cat's mind is cracking under the pressure like sand turned into glass/
Only time anyone felt his shit is when he stuck his own hand in his ass/
ntroducing Knuckle to Head... Jacking PAna's steeze... What?.. Just made ya think/
Why does it seems like everything quotable from Jay was wrriten in disappearing ink?/
Champ by default.. better follow suit pull a Canem and just know show/
Not a part of the crew but reppin FAGS just to prove he's homo/
Repping Sub-Zero in this verbal Mortal Kombat so prepare for the deep freeze/
A [.Flawless.] victory...
what did you expect...
besides these punks jackin my steeze...

What?...

*Bribeone1 Walks Suavely Onto The Stage*

Ok Feeble First, What Can I Say!!.Just Go Up And Peep His Battle Verse-
Hardcore Means Pain, Feeble Brought It ...But Only His Image Hurtz-
Dumb Fuck Read Rulez!!.Seems God Chizzled Ya Brain, Witt Dull Toolz-
PA Made u Their Leader?.They Must B Joking.....Bunch Of Cruel Foolz-
Image Duelz Show Lack Of Character.. Jay, Knuckle, Back 2 Jay-
Pheine Is Convulsing, Whithdrawing, Must B From Losing-Not From Lack Of J's-
Now We Know Hes Finally Dead-Hes' Left A Regime For Lack Of Intelligence-
So Goodbye, Good Ridence, Taste My farewell Witt A Smack Of Ill Sentiments-


*Av Walks On Stage Smirking*

dude ya styles old... consider this open the truth,
Pana's only dope line... was good... when they invented the swoosh...
I swear I kidnap pussies... that's no lie fag,
FUCK... guess I'm gonna have to let this cat... outta the bag..
caution tape over ya road to success... it sucks espe-cially
since I deconstructed... all Feebles avenues... to battle conquest...
I'm shakin candy emcees willingly... I'm on a killing 'spree' but worst,
you can not only watch him die... but also see the starburst...
It's true... this dudes on his way to the top of the nation,
only thing wrong is I burn when pissed off... Jay burns through urination...
minded is far from cable... career canceled from bluffing,
just like abc shows... no emcee raps after they... 30 something...
watch the dick riders... they'll vote in moderation,
what the votes edit... when it's a mod your facin...
next time... think about runnin... if you can't punch like I do,
and next time you ask for help... don't message God through Yahoo...

*Thug Whyte Pops His Head Out*

Expose This Fakers Status.. Bout Time You Resign The Game..
Lies A Shame.. You Suck, And Yes Feeble You Define Your Name..
Dont Mind My Reign.. He Reps PA, Like Its Something Supreme..
But Wasn't It Funny, When Your Co-Leader Tried Out For Regime!?..

*13th Walks Out*

Loss the battle 5 to ground Zero....Now NY you seem to ENVY
Afterwards...switchin back to Pana cuz u couldn't Knuckle up
This is a hardcore battle...so u should get DQ'd for showin up
Read ur interview in the mag......i agree....u should retire...
Heard ur audio...only time rippin chords..is while caught wit a wire
Crew jumpin ass....Twice in regime....now switchin back to A.I.
I wonder why Kronik asked for this guy..does he know about NY?
Its Ludacris the way i move this bitch & make him get out the way
For u i'll drop 10....cuz Rumor is Jaypanas fond of childs play!....

Feeble ur shit out of luck........like givin laxatives to Elves
U say u need ban sticks 4 herbs...well start bannin urself
I remember u scorned.....when declined a spot in regime
U should of seen it comin when theres ME in the TEAM
46-11?....wow...but i see thru it & still know ur a herb
I'm not Perfect.....^but rb would agree that statement is Word
U dropped ur verse 1st....but Disciple havin trouble to feed
Cuz it lacks the basic essentials....like a starvin orphan wit needs

*...Sureal Walks Out Laughin...*

Hi Kids, Who Wants To See These Two Cats Ripped And Left Dead?..
Pana, Going To Cemetery With A Guillotine, Still Can't Get A Head..
Wtf.. Come On ...What Kind Of A Screen Name Is Feeble Minded..?
If Birth Defects Were Skill, Damn Man.. You Musta Declined It..
Time To Alias Rip These Heads, Like Bitches With Skinned Knees..
Like Idiots Smoking, Nick O Tines Killin Knuckle Heads For Me..
Flip Tha Names And Lets Tell The True Story In This Battle..
While Jays Taking ANAP, Mindeds ELBEEF'IN, Porkin The Cattle..
And I Bet Ya He'll Get Some Whack Mc To Tryta Burn My Topicals..
But We All Know, Only Way Jay Get Higher In Standing, Poppin Pills..
From The Content Above Those Two Kids Stuttering, ..B-B-But..
Internal Regime Rippin Pana, And Leaving Feeble Witha...What..?

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Old 08-28-03, 11:47 PM   #7
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here we go...

first for feeble minded
Feeble Has An Imaginary Ban Stick, He’s Filled With Rage…
He Tried To Take It Out On Me, But He Couldn’t Get It Out Tha Cage…
Feeble’s Good? I Didn’t Know, I Must Be Losing My Mind…
I Would Borrow Sureal’s, But That’s Too Hard To Find…
How Can You Be Supermod? You Checked In With A Banned Username…
If He Did Become Supermod, This Site Would Really Be Lame…
Another Played Computer Line, Somebody Click On His Lights…
Maybe Something Original Will Appear, Tha Chances Of That Is Slight…
He Really Wants To, But Won’t Win, It’s Sickening At Heart…
He Wants First Second And Third, Look, He Even Got An Early Start…
Here’s Where I Get Ripped? Ha!, And I Though I Was Tha Nerd…
If You Had A Ban Stick You’d End Up Banning Yourself…Herb!...

now for Sureal
It’s Like We’re In Oregon How Sureal’s Trailing And Got Blazed…
He Tries To Break Rules And Dance To Victory, He Fell And Got Dazed…
I Got A Preview Of His Verse In Tha A.I. Forum, Couldn’t Wait To See Tha Rest…
Neva Came Hard In His Life, Perfect Example Of Wackness At It’s Best…
He Got Like Six People Writin Extra Verses, Did You Really Write Yours?...
He Can’t Knock Me Out, Dying Of Laughter Is Tha Only Way I’d Hit Tha Floor…
He Used To Be Blaze2k4…Changed Names And Is Now Sureal…
Got A Good Name, Wackness Never Left Him, It’s Sad That I’m For Real…
Look! Now He’s Flawless!, We Know Your Mother Didn’t Name You That…
Stick To Topicals, ‘Cuz We All Know When It Comes To Battling, Sureal Is Wack…
I’m Treating Sureal Just Like Tha Regime, Falling Flat On His Face…
He’s Dirt, I’m Like A Swiffer Mop How I’m Whiping Him All Over Tha Place…

*drops mic*
chrit grabs tha mic...

Aight look...

In a hardcore three-way? This must be any man's dream come true/
Especially true for Flawless and Feeb considering its all dudes/
Surreal transformed into Flawless.. by god, a start is born!!!/
Bound to become famous for starring in his Poke-porn...(read his posts)/
Approaching me to ghostwrite quoting all that skill you lack.../
Better leave regime like Bax... and try for a Compton Records comeback/
You got it right the first time... its true your mind is feeble and narrow/
In fact this cat is so dense he tried a drive-by with a bow and arrow/
Like your alias's on this site... you're banned from WP and Regime/
Hell you actually thought you'd look less wack with a name like Nick O Teen?.../
Got two stalkers in this battle... all up on my words and stole my style/
Just prepare to call this bitches Cleo since the about to be Queens of Da Nile/
What?...

baxter continues...
Sureal starts school on Sept. 2nd...



Feeble wants to be a supermod..but he isnt dope, hell never run the show
in fact, only time anyone wants to hear anything FM..is on the radio
no guest cameos..proving once again this kid isnt respected when it comes to rap
his lines went out last year..while KH is ahead of his time..like Mike Vick throwbacks
in battles you lack... shouldnt even attempted this..know what im sayin?
whats sad is that JP beat your ass.....even though he is 'Jus Playin'


whoa.


i admit Sureal was once dope..but never on the mountain, just on top of hills
its as if he writes for a a talk show..the way he only comes with played topicals
your skills? nill...no one cares who you have write for you in this, youll still lose
starts Sept. 2nd..but with the way JP tought you its already 'Back 2 Skool'
......

Jay is taking this battle easily... didnt even need the help of me
takin out two homos with one verse...like buy one get one free

now for ToNe-E
Fuck These Kids Doing Here .. Jus' Go Home n' Walk Back
i'll Slap Flawless iN the Mouth, so He can Really Talk Smack
FM Be Spittin' Cock Rap .. Me and Jay'll Kill em' inna Bout
Feeble Eats Wack Mc's .. So What Goes in Must Come Out!
Ouch .. That must've Hurt .. ToNe n' Jay Will Own this Fight
Sureal would Have a Better Chance Winnin, Postin a Open Mic!
Oh iM Right, u Got no Battle Skillz .. Doesn't FM Jock Guys?
He's always Starin at Dicks .. How u Think he Got Cock Eyed!?
iM not Blind, i can See Victory as i Wreck and Fuckin' Rip it
And The Only TiMe These 2 Fagz Come Off The Top ..
is When They're changin Gay Sex Positions!

it's ova...

VOTERS!: mainly focus on tha competitors actual verses...then tha cameos
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Old 08-29-03, 12:38 AM   #8
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good battle good battle.....but yo sureal....u left parts of my verse
out in the first piece like the opener...but props to both....let the
votings commence
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Old 08-29-03, 01:06 AM   #9
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god damn!
long verses (:
oh well now i know what to expect next time i battle like this (never lol)

oh and

i changed my title to dope-ness
it was "needs ban stick for herbs" just so yall know their personals werent fake.....
 
Old 08-30-03, 05:11 AM   #10
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Vote: Surreal.

His verse was DOPE as hell..
Especially - the part with Avalon on it.
This was an interesting match to read -
Due to the fact that; y’all had other cats rapping for you;
But Surreal clenched it with - FLOW, punches..
And by having - DOPER - people appearing for him.
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Old 08-30-03, 07:22 AM   #11
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who is bare knuckles?
your vote doesnt count
unless you are an LLL
member right?
 
Old 08-30-03, 01:41 PM   #12
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Vote Sureal

He came very hard.....and had others came as hard for him......this is a very interesting title, he had an all-star cast on his side........he overpowered this battle with punches, personal's flow, creativity, every category
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Old 08-30-03, 04:07 PM   #13
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Votes Count As Long As Not Noobs...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75980

^Knucks Is In The League

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Old 08-31-03, 04:33 PM   #14
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Vote: Sureal

Just Came Harder With The Punches In This One, Not Really From His Verse, But The Guys Who Guest Appeared For Him! FM Really Had No Chance, He Came Ok, But His Verse Was Nothing When Matched Against The Lengths Of Those Two, Nice Battle Between Jay & Sureal But I Think Sureal Edged It Out.
 
Old 09-02-03, 07:33 PM   #15
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this was a long as fuck battle......GOD DAM...lol
but im going to give this one to sureal...becauze he had nice flow threw out the verses lol .. and nice punches AKA Sureal..Av..and i seen a few others that were hot... this was a nice battle but sureal took it with quality verses from his verses that helped with his...nice job from everyone..but they were out dun by sureal and most of regime..lol

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