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07-18-02, 03:21 AM | #1 | ||||||
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If Things Came To Pass
Like Unattained Knowlege In An Endless Elaspe Of Time, Mind, Body And Space Id Fucking Make My Own Self Evaporate And Rise From The Grave Id Make Everyone That Was Famous Want To Be Me Make Them Do Crazy Shit Just To Get On Tv No One Could Raise My Celeb Status Id Be One Of Greats Motherfuckers Would Familarize My Face And Make No Mistake Im A Goodfella From Casinos To A Dog Day Afternoon I Show No Remorce In Any Battle No Condition Is Interfering Wit My Mission And I Refuse To Listen To These Ludacris Accusitions Whut You Think You Is And What Kind Of Game Is You Playin (Please If You Would Please Take A Sit A Just Listen) Theres No Mistake About It I Must Just Be Lyrically Retarted Or Just Plain Out Worn Out From All These Fucking People Shouting Out And All These Fans Finding Out That Im Not What I Appear I Dont Do Drugs And I Dont Got No Fears Im Just A Soldier Without A Squadren Give Me Some Hot-Pockets For Rations And A Spear And For Whats It Worth And For These Words I Dispuse Id Just Like To Say A Few Words Before I Go To The Parents Of The Mis-Understood-Youth Fuck You To The People Who Never Said I Could Make It Fuck You And To Everyone I Thought I Loved And Thought Loved Me Back Fuck You Cuz Now Im Different Cuz Now Everythings Different And It Wont Ever Be The Same You Live What You Do So Just Go On Living Pretend That Im Gone And Moved Fuck It Man Face The Facts...You Lose |
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07-18-02, 03:42 AM | #2 | ||||||
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yo cuz you sound like you got a lotta issues to get off your chest.....
well let me tell you that you came to the right board cuz.... if you look at some of the posts in dis forum 1/2 of them r jus peeps ventin and shit.... anywayz that was a decent spit.... it would be coo if you could peep out my shit "down and out" and "that concience" keep spittin and peace out cuz |
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07-18-02, 04:12 AM | #3 | |||||||
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Wasnt feeling it........ it seems like it's been done b4...nothing that'll make you be like "damn that was kinda ill"
but anyways.....just work on it.... Peace........ 1............... |
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07-18-02, 07:45 AM | #4 | ||||||
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no offence but this started off soundin like eminem but the middle section was very nice ya general vocab improved alot and the flow was workin. topic wise yea its been done before but if its what ya gettin off ya chest then who cares? anyway keep droppin verses aight peace.
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