Battle Rules:

6 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-02-04 at 07:52 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Krown the King has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 04:53 PM.

Notorious Verses has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-02-04 04:55 PM.

game over from the begining he probully might not even post~his~verse/
im not makin up storys he could just be wack or is a fuckin ghost~n~his~Cursed/
if his rhymes were clear not 'disortered' like they were a deck~of~cards/
all the niggas that you think 'supported' you, u can fuckin check~the~regards/*
check the def. bitch "notorious", ya 'name', means havin a excidinly bad~reputation/
you weak fake rapper are all the 'same' you bitchs are becomin a sad~aggravation/
this nigga writes in text not on a mic so we dont no hes a bitch soundin~thing/
check under my name, the decision was made so... fuckin crown~the~king./

uppin for your verse

all shit i for got the * means when he won his battle people said shit about it

damn ur a bitch this is like the fifth battle you ran from

I Live For Contreversy, Rivalries, And Enemies As U See In Ma Sig
Dawg Ur Flow Is Not Hot, So Ur Mind Always Thinks "Chilli" Like Usher Did
Watch Me Inflict, Constrict Ya Ass In Boundary Sticks
Keep Ur Dome Restricted Like A Convict Wen PoPo's Split
Thought Ur Flow Was Straight, But Like Da World Now Ur Style Is Gay
And Dawg Like Every Thing Dat Goes On In Ya Life, Ya RV Government Is Fadin Away
Ur Rhymes Is Wet Like Diapers, Mine Blows Up Like Army Satchels
Its Ironic Dat Ur Government States Wat Da Administrator Gon Do Afta I Win Dis Battle
Dawg Ill "BUSS" U Easily Like Performin' Masterbation
Its Liek A Debate U Bush Im Kerry, Dose Are My Closin Statements

dats my battle dawg, now u satisfied i posted my verse

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

Punches: king
personals: verse
flow: king
style: verse
complexity: verse
mults: verse

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

ok
ahhh...and iight battle

tho...Verses takes this in a bad way

i'll show the good and bad of both verses

N.V.
wordplay=tight
flow=good
structure=okay
punches overall=good
opener=tight!!!
closer=good
vocab=tight

K.t.K=

wordplay=bad=semi okay
flow=okay
structure=terrible
punches=almost good
opener=bad
closer=okay
vocab=okay

winner:Notorious Verses

pc

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nigga wat da fuck u talkin bout, i don run from battles and how did i run away u dirlick

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nigga look in ur sig it even said you didv

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

this was an over all weak battle......Notorious Verses one by a couple better punches....i mean Krown The King.....you came weak.....that drop left you hangin like where's the rest....and Notorious Verses had better wordplay on top of that....KTK.....your structure was off.....you guys and both elevate.....weak battle

v/ Notorious Verses

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Voted For: Notorious Verses

nv easily took this one......, with punches and clear thoughts........ the usher line was dope........ but i would work on shortening your lines to make your rhymes flow a little better......... king made little to no sense what so ever.......... made his verse very hard to follow




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