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Old 07-15-05, 01:54 AM   #1
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Third Person Tony!!!!!!!!!

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Murderin raw soldierz….it comes naturally to cas……
I see through tha fake shit…like im peerin out glass……
Tephlon yer a homo….yer last 5 crews were erased…..
Now u got tony in yer embrace…raws more disgraced….
Mr. foe conrner hustla bout to get smashed on right here…..
I thought tony queen was gon..then this fag reappears….
Your roster getting gayer…like gay marriges in tha church……
Im leavin raw INJURED but only because tha TRUTH HURTZ……
Got sheif and tony green on board…runnin for fukkin rv prez…….
U really want sumone who talkz third person in errything he says….
“tony green will do this …and tony greens dope like that”…….
Tony green should point out….. all tha skillz that he lackz…
Cause hes wack…had tephz nuts in his mouth since he been bak……
Shoulda stayed off rapverse…and on tephlonz ball sac……..

Fuck this kidz not worth tha barz….like givin fatz kidz chocolate……
Shoulda realized when u came bakk…in 2 monthz yer omz aint got one hit…..
Uh-oh this kidz bout to clog tha forums with gay om…….
Phony queen screamin for sumone to remember em…..
3 months in juvy got you thinking u hard ..bitch please!…….
In tha pen u woulda spent 90%of yer time”on yer knees”
Said u be beatin up peeps in tha box…dogg why u frontin…..
Cause in juv little boi yer inch worm tha only thing u thumpin…..
And even bakk when I was casper..i would still merk u then too….
Call up colnal mustard…u still wouldn’t have a fukkin CLUE…..
Fukk this im done…this gay rapper cant reproduce rymes……
Its an impossible task……like reading for tha blind………

AHAHAHAHAHA ENUFF SAID RIGHT THERE WILL RIP ANYTHING THAT COMES FROM TONY GREEN AND YA BEST BELIVE THAT BITCH

LIVIN LEGENDZ PRODUCTIONZ BITCHES BUT YALL ALREADY KNOW WITH FLOW LIKE THAT
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Old 07-15-05, 01:56 AM   #2
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=199602
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Old 07-15-05, 02:16 AM   #3
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This was a decent drop..it could have been alot better...some lines were alittle simplict to me..you could have used better wording..and vocab usuage..maybe some punchlines..would have been good to ....you had acouple good personals that were pretty good... structure was okay... could have been better... Overall this was a pretty decent diss om..could have been better if you used some meta's and hard punchlines ..but it was overall good..keep it up
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Old 07-15-05, 02:34 PM   #4
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we still beefin wit them?....geez....

this was pretty str8 though....yeah...ya punches were kinda simple...but yu kept it simplistic thru out this piece....i love ya anger in this.....

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Old 07-20-05, 05:16 PM   #5
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Old 07-20-05, 05:22 PM   #6
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good shit fams...

Was feelin the tone.
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Old 07-20-05, 06:18 PM   #7
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pretty cool diss fam a couple nice concepts.... maybe coulda been worded better but still u vgot at da kid
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Old 07-20-05, 06:45 PM   #8
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oh shit........ nice diss....... can't wait to see the pussy ass come back
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Old 07-21-05, 10:22 AM   #9
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Old 07-25-05, 01:38 PM   #11
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lmao fukk u homo ive been in jail for 2 years at once youngen im much older than 12 reverse it than think again u whore
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