Its week 3 of this 7 week season. I've cut the league from 32 to 24 and eliminated group D so the league has only serious competitors. Fewer people means fewer eligible voters so everyone please vote on as many battles as you can. 2 people who would have won last week lost because they didn't vote. Don't make me do this again. Also, fewer people in the league means fewer playoff spots will be given out so drop your best or risk not making the playoffs.

Battler #1: Oneduh
Battler #2: Te Ora

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

Good Luck.

Check the news, you'll never see this guy own me
The outcome'll look like the big headline last month "TO failed when he tried OD"

a day later you FINALLY decide to turn up?




if records = the scoreboard, this game is tied.. but my foes a crime
thinking it gives him the right to flip my name and go 24 hrs Over Time
nice flip on the TO shit.. i haven't seen it done in quiet the same way
O's D is tremendous. he "Jack'd Up" my prior opponents..
..to steal their name plays

Trus told me this dude was good a textin, but the board knows
T is tight.. but only if that's a reference to his wardrobe

Check the news, you'll never see this guy own me
The outcome'll look like the big headline last month "TO failed when he tried OD"
SIMPLE FLIP THAT COULDVE BEEN WORDED BETTER

if records = the scoreboard, this game is tied.. but my foes a crime
thinking it gives him the right to flip my name and go 24 hrs Over Time
WORDING FOR THE SETUP TOOK AWAY FROM THE PUNCH OK IDEA THOUGH
nice flip on the TO shit.. i haven't seen it done in quiet the same way
O's D is tremendous. he "Jack'd Up" my prior opponents..
..to steal their name plays
CONCEPT ABOUT PLAYED NAMEPLAYS FINISHED WITH A 'D'FENSE REFERENCE MAKES IT JUST AS PLAYED LOL



Trus told me this dude was good a textin, but the board knows
T is tight.. but only if that's a reference to his wardrobe

COMON FELLAS YOU GUYS OD'D ON THE NAMEPLAYS HERE
DEF NOT WHAT I EXPECTED
BOTH WERE CLOSE IN EFFECTIVENESS OR WHATEVER
I THOUGHT ONES 1ST BAR WAS THE BEST OF THE PLAYS SO
V/ ONE

Check the news, you'll never see this guy own me
The outcome'll look like the big headline last month "TO failed when he tried OD"
^decent nameplay

vs

if records = the scoreboard, this game is tied.. but my foes a crime
thinking it gives him the right to flip my name and go 24 hrs Over Time
^i like this punch but the set up was weak
nice flip on the TO shit.. i haven't seen it done in quiet the same way
O's D is tremendous. he "Jack'd Up" my prior opponents..
..to steal their name plays
^really wasnt feeling this one

vs

Trus told me this dude was good a textin, but the board knows
T is tight.. but only if that's a reference to his wardrobe
^ i like it, simple and effective

this was an ok battle but i felt that oneduh had the better punches plain and simple

vote/one

Oneduh
Check the news, you'll never see this guy own me
The outcome'll look like the big headline last month "TO failed when he tried OD"
Streched as shit, but great idea..
Trus told me this dude was good a textin, but the board knows
T is tight.. but only if that's a reference to his wardrobe
Not a fan of this line..


Te Ora
if records = the scoreboard, this game is tied.. but my foes a crime
thinking it gives him the right to flip my name and go 24 hrs Over Time
Wording was off, lost effect..
nice flip on the TO shit.. i haven't seen it done in quiet the same way
O's D is tremendous. he "Jack'd Up" my prior opponents..
..to steal their name plays
Not bad, I dig it..

Oneduh's first punch was the best of the battle and took this one for him..

Vote: Oneduh

only bar i really like was the wardrobe one from oneduh. besides that each had one decent concept but w/ bad wording so yea....

v/ oneduh

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word.. 0-4.. propz on the battle one


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