i did something like this but being that i have nuttin to do ima switch it up.


every second on this earth is a ripple to a different realm.
a minute into birth is an eternaty where time dwels.
bullet shells, car accidents, plane crashes there all slow.
birth, death, hate, love, what if we can control the hole show.
a flow of time beats with us as we move a normal pace at will
in the ripples of time every thing just seems to stand still.
time almost seems to reverse it self, like reading a story.
jumping back in the pages trying to see what came before me.

what if it was true.... what if the ripples can be broken.
changing time and reversing the evil and nonspoken.
joking? no, we could change the world 2 a better place.
we can stop racisit shit, stop those planes before our face.
save millions of lives, at the same time, what a joy.
we can feed the children that are staving, girls and boys.
we can stop assasinations. before they even happens.
move bullets right back to its chamber, unload it, clappin.
we could change the world if we could change our minds.
use a positive perspective and use the ripples of time.

u can stop rape, murders,and gang 2 gang violence.
in the other realm all we will hear is silence.
quite whispers, watching clocks going backwards.
seeing the hands move as the mouth swallows words.
knives out of the stomach closing the wound.
blood poors back in, sun turns to stars and the moon.
soon.... some day some one will discover ths skill.
till the the ripples of time will just be another story thats ill...

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im so ill that cancer thinks im its father.

great peice liked the emotion showed ur getting better at this liek the flow and the lyrics structure was aight too

doing great goodjob

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