dis is da first lyrics i hav wrote i was wonderin if u cud rate me?
ASC is my cru and names and shit r relevant if u r british

The tightness of my metaphorical lyrics
Exploding in ur brain lik advanced physics
The chemistry of the equation
Word on word causing earthquake tremors
From Rochdale bungalows to New York tenaments
I'm spittin my vocal testament
Caught in the fury of belligiment
Between body and mind causing a fake figiment
Twistin and rippin lik Roy Keane on a ligiment
Causing more destruction dan any government
My words blowin in ur brain it is imminent
Dat dis wil giv u brain loss causing a speech impediment
Using pen + paper as my rhyming implement
I write facts dat may start an incident
I'll get u drinkin 40's 'n poppin pills for merriment
My words blowin thro ur brain lik and open vent
Now its time for u to stand in line from orders off da ASC regiment

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