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Old 12-06-06, 11:23 AM   #1
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I'm the "ESSENCE OF ROCKS GOING THROUGH WINDOWS AND SHATTERING"//
the "MESSAGE FROM GOD SHOWING YOU KINFOLKS ARE BATTLING"//
I've been low with savages, originated from the "GARDEN OF EDEN"//
I was "SCARRED AND LEFT BLEEDING" traveled the 'FARTHEST OF REGIONS"//
to "BARDER WITH DEMONS" for a lost soul, which is "PART OF THE REASON"//
I stopped after I "STARTED BELIEVING" because I could only be a "MARTYR TO HEATHENS"//
a Father? didn't need him, I was left "ALONE IN BARS"//
a "HOME FOR SCARS" on the "road to success" but someone "STOLE THE CAR"//
so a lonely heart was left "COLD INSIDE" no one to "CONSOLE MY MIND"//
tears "FLOWED TILL DRIED" so there's no hope, had to cope with a "SOUL THAT DIED"//
and I'd float in the notes "COMPOSERS WRITE"//
the epitome of my epiphanies was the symphony of tears with "HOPES TO TRY"//
but misery's cloaked in pride so that's the "SIDE YOU COULDNT SEE"//
attached and "APPLIED TO CROOKED GREED" but I'd "HIDE WITH BOOKS AND READ"//
confined a crook in me to "FIND KNOWLEDGE",cant get "INSIDE COLLEGE"//
so you try to look for the signs of god with "BLIND OPTICS"//
and my prayers are worthless, have you "TRIED TALKING"//
to God in "RHYMES OFTEN" but he never could "PROVIDE SOLACE"//
but besides all this, honestly, I couldn't "TAKE TO THE DRUGS"//
to "GAPE WOUNDS AND CUTS" but they wouldn't be there if I hadn't tried to "REPLACE TRUTH FOR LOVE"//

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Old 12-06-06, 11:24 AM   #2
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I dont hardly ever post on here... but hey I'm lookin for a new home site.... hoping this could be it..... so leave me feed home....

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Old 12-06-06, 11:43 AM   #3
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good shit dog Ballerstatus.com is better if your looking for possitive construtive critisim though keep droppin hot shit son
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Old 12-06-06, 02:20 PM   #4
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BALLIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Ay-ya-yo-whoa-whoa, WTF is CHip?
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Old 12-06-06, 02:43 PM   #5
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^^ does this dude ever make any since it's like u got turetts syndrome or somethin on line you really need to take some valume or somethin JOe
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Old 12-06-06, 06:17 PM   #6
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^^ does this dude ever make any since it's like u got turetts syndrome or somethin on line you really need to take some valume or somethin JOe


Or I could take your mother. Does she count for something shithead?
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Old 12-07-06, 08:17 AM   #7
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Get Your White Wanna Be Arab Ass Outta Here
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Old 12-07-06, 11:36 AM   #8
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Get Your White Wanna Be Arab Ass Outta Here


Um...Black Wanna Be Arab ASS Outta Here*

And K illa, your actin' like a real bitch nowadays.
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Old 12-07-06, 12:25 PM   #9
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Black wanna be Arab thats even worse do u even live in the Hood Arabs treat us niggaz as bad as white people. Your a wierdo that makes no sence period
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Old 12-19-06, 08:31 PM   #10
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Dope shit dude.
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Old 12-19-06, 08:33 PM   #11
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killa is ip banned soon anyway just needs one more vote against him
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Old 01-09-07, 11:14 AM   #12
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Man wut tha fuck my thread was onver run wit freeposting mufuckaz


Wow gay shit....

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Old 01-17-07, 06:06 AM   #13
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flow started out really good it was cool for a text peice i guess alot of multis
coabulary was cool there was soem simple metaphores and wordplay nothign too special but ti was cool
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Old 01-17-07, 09:28 AM   #14
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im an audio head now....still do text but i come in cuz i neglect where i came from

ok seems to me like ur in a deep mode right now soooooo

I'm the "ESSENCE OF ROCKS GOING THROUGH WINDOWS AND SHATTERING"//
the "MESSAGE FROM GOD SHOWING YOU KINFOLKS ARE BATTLING"//
(ok)
I've been low with savages, originated from the "GARDEN OF EDEN"//
I was "SCARRED AND LEFT BLEEDING" traveled the 'FARTHEST OF REGIONS"//
(ok)
to "BARDER WITH DEMONS" for a lost soul, which is "PART OF THE REASON"//
I stopped after I "STARTED BELIEVING" because I could only be a "MARTYR TO HEATHENS"//
(i liked that last line....that was a good reversal right there, good multis so far)
a Father? didn't need him, I was left "ALONE IN BARS"//
a "HOME FOR SCARS" on the "road to success" but someone "STOLE THE CAR"//
(hehe ok...coo play)
so a lonely heart was left "COLD INSIDE" no one to "CONSOLE MY MIND"//
tears "FLOWED TILL DRIED" so there's no hope, had to cope with a "SOUL THAT DIED"//
(k)
and I'd float in the notes "COMPOSERS WRITE"//
the epitome of my epiphanies was the symphony of tears with "HOPES TO TRY"//
(like the multis in here and flow in these two)
but misery's cloaked in pride so that's the "SIDE YOU COULDNT SEE"//
attached and "APPLIED TO CROOKED GREED" but I'd "HIDE WITH BOOKS AND READ"//
(k....coo shyt)
confined a crook in me to "FIND KNOWLEDGE",cant get "INSIDE COLLEGE"//
so you try to look for the signs of god with "BLIND OPTICS"//
(k....not bad , kinda nice)
and my prayers are worthless, have you "TRIED TALKING"//
to God in "RHYMES OFTEN" but he never could "PROVIDE SOLACE"//
(coo shyt)
but besides all this, honestly, I couldn't "TAKE TO THE DRUGS"//
to "GAPE WOUNDS AND CUTS" but they wouldn't be there if I hadn't tried to "REPLACE TRUTH FOR LOVE"//
(multis were kinda eh here...seemed a lil forced with the rhymin and all.....)

all in all deep piece, im def feelin the content/subject matter here.......this is more of a spoken word piece so if u ever convert this to audio....just make it one of those beats where theres nothin too hard but its like just somethin u can chill too and let this piece out
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